Reviews for Hypocrisy
Matt Morwell chapter 1 . 9/15/2003
*whistles between teeth* Wow. Only Bakura could tell a story in that manner. Cruel bastard. But then again, that's what makes him such a perfectly evil character, isn't it?
posedtodeath chapter 1 . 8/15/2003
Hehe. That was so cool! Dark, but very amusing. _
Kyrene once Blood Roses chapter 1 . 7/15/2003
I love these kind of stories. They help me find out Bakura's life story _. I like knowing that kind of stuff, this was incredibly good. I love Ryou...I love Bakura...It works. _
Eowyn85 chapter 1 . 7/13/2003


REALLY good fic.

It was sorta funny, too, the way Yami Bakura told the story with the little things he said to Bakura like "Shut up and listen" and "Don't pick at your bandages" and "Stop giving me that pitying look, dammit!"
YuumeiKagami chapter 1 . 6/19/2003
Wow...I read this, and it left me feeling absolutely stunned. And compelled to reread it several times. It's...strangely chilling, to say the least. Poor Ryou..(Ryou: *whimpers*)
Amarielle chapter 1 . 6/16/2003

Uh...that was, uh...


You never cease to amaze and terrify me in one sitting. Very well done, indeed.


This is going on my favs list.
cheesepuff chapter 1 . 6/15/2003
That was... morbidly fascinating. Very nicely written. I liked the way you wrote it with only dialog, you don't see fics in that style that are really good very often.
Ezra chapter 1 . 6/14/2003
hmm. Very disturbing fic. I love it! I especially found the "landlord" nickname amsing. Fitting. But amusing. Good job! *adds to favorites*
Sailor Comet chapter 1 . 6/5/2003
(I'm not here)

good fic-would say more but keyboard is fucked

Wildcard chapter 1 . 6/5/2003
very cool story, as usual. I like the way that Yami Bakura described irony especially - I found it most ironic.

What's scary is that when the Author Alert arrived in my inbox, the first thing that caught my attention was your summary - which looked almost exactly like one of my mine, except without the yaoi warning.

They're both based on the same premise though, except yours is about Bakura and mine is about Ryou - and yours is longer. A lot longer. So yeah, well done.
decuvieri chapter 1 . 6/4/2003
A definate turn from the usual style for Rayemars-sama. I like it.

I like it because it had me wondering through the whole thing. At first I had no idea why or what, but it was like all the pieces just suddenly fit in at the end. This is the basis for an excellent story, and you wrote it quite well.

It takes Yami Bakura to tell a bedtime story like *that*.

Yuck. Cold medacine. I feel for you. **shudder**
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