where are you? You haven’t posted in a while now please post.

this was godly

I'm really hoping that you update this story really interested in seeing where you're taking this. and on another note, what is it about people losing intelligence when they see their favorite character being in the wrong or maybe your average reviewer is such a narutard fanatics that simple politics confuses them. Either way next chapter when?

PLEASE update. This story is far too good to just drop.

MOREEEEE

Rest In Peace.

This story gets progressively darker. I came looking for light hearted fun and humor and now im reading about genocide and depression episodes

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we ever going to get an update, or will it sit empty like a lot of other stories and gather dust while new stories are started?

Naruto should've been sent lol. Sasuke sucks when it comes to relations with others. When you want someone dead, send Sasuke. When you want to talk, improve relationships, etc, you send Naruto!

Are you dead

**Meant to post this on chapter 20 but it wouldn’t let me**

I just went back through and binge read this story again and love it quite a lot.

I will say the way you jump from pov to pov having the story focus on each member of team 7 pretty much equally is both a positive and a negative.

It does allow us to flesh out the world building and see the growth of team 7 as individuals. However it also is a constant break in their individual storylines and it almost feels like right as I get invested in one of their storylines the pov end and we’re now focusing on an entirely different storyline for the next section/chapter.

Personally I agree with the comments that suggest possibly making those other POVs fair less often used or maybe make them separate stories entirely That’s just my opinion as while I think it’s great to do this on occasion to have POVs from others outside one main character it gets to be way to much. Personally I feel the amount of time you placed on character a such as Sona and Rias as the sole POVs is the perfect amount for anyone other than the main character of the story. For example short little sections from the various members of team 7, shorts sections of various pantheons, but mostly focus on the MC.

Honestly it seems you jump from Naruto as the MC to Sasuke as the MC. I personally, and again this is just my opinion, think you need to pick one. It really doesn’t matter which one as you have done well to write them out (well except Naruto in this last chapter that’s honestly just absolutely random and makes no sense whatsoever).

I would love to see the is story continued but I gotta say the last quarter of this chapter was kind of random and made little sense. Like don’t get me wrong I totally get why politics would require the Shinto to banish Naruto for an attack on another pantheon on their own soil. Even though they started it that wouldn’t matter much like how it would happen in diplomatic disputes in our world. Sometimes you have to have a scapegoat to ensure there won’t be a full on war. It sucks but I get it and honestly it would likely be at best a temporary measure like it is in most types of stories that this happens with a Main Character.

That said the whole randomly deciding to commit genocide, having that super strange discussion with Kurama where he states Kurama has and always will be an obstacle for Naruto and then claims he said it to show he cares about Kurama made absolutely no sense whatsoever.

then Naruto randomly pulls out some super crazy plan that can apparently allow him to wipe out all of Olympus at once and is totally all for it out of nowhere. Then the Yomi shows up claiming she is going to torture him till he becomes someone entirely different as a person…

My dude that whole last quarter was honestly a mess. Again I absolutely love this story so far but still. It honestly reads super edgy and chunni I truly expected him to put on some cape and claim he is now the darkness made manifest or something. Ok not really but all joking aside it was just super dark, edgy and above all absolutely random I don’t know if you were just in a dark mood when you wrote this part or if it had been the plan all along but honestly this is a rather strange direction you have taken.

Again I love your story and hope to see it continued I just worry about some of the choices and actions in this chapter.

update man update

Hello,

This is going to be long, so bear with me. I'll try my best to break it into sections, but I use voice to text, so I kind of just ramble when things pop up into my head.

I really enjoy the creativity of this High School DxD fanfiction. The crossover is really well done, especially since you're working with multiple elements. This could probably explain why you haven't updated either because you're not interested in this anymore or it's just very taxing since you have to think about all these moving pieces. Either way, it's very nicely done.

One of the main things I really want to say is, if you do continue the story, please make more authors' notes. I know a lot of people don't read authors' notes, but for those of us who do, and especially if you go on long hiatuses, it goes a really long way to show that you care about your audience or your story or that you read the comments. Unlike on AO3, where if someone makes a comment, the author can comment right under them, it's a lot more complicated on this site. So, by not having an author's note at the beginning or the end of the chapter kind of addressing some concerns or just your thought process behind things, or just saying hi and thank you, it really does go a long way. I think a lot more people than you think care about what you have to say. Look at the number of comments you have.

The reason I bring this up is because I was reading through the comments and a lot of people had similar sentiments to me, especially about how underutilized Naruto was in the beginning of the story. A lot of things really don't make any sense. For instance, these characters are constantly turning down power. I understand that they don't want the burden of power or the responsibility that comes with it, but they literally watched their planet die. They're offered power and they're ninjas going into the unknown. So if a dragon god who crosses dimensions says, "Hey, I can give you a power boost," saying, "No, we have enough power," is kind of weird. Or how hard they fought to not become gods again is kind of weird. The only negative to that whole situation was that they would be tied down, but if they got banished or something, they wouldn't be tied down. They just wouldn't have the support or allies. But they're strong. They're arguably the strongest people in the pantheon, so they don't have to worry about it.

Another common concern among your fans is the jumping back and forth between these characters, which doesn't really allow them to feel fleshed out. You, as the author, have to pick and choose which character's story you want to flesh out, which I think left a lot of people feeling snuffed about Naruto. You set up a promised fight and then it just didn't happen because Sasuke stole the show. That was a continuous and sudden thing that just kept happening. While I don't think you should kill Naruto off as a character, I do think, as you were doing before you went on this hiatus (hopefully again you come back before the steam and hype of this dies completely), you should focus on Naruto and his story a bit more.

Something I found here on fanfiction is a lot more people care about Naruto's story, so when they look for a Naruto Universe story, they look for Naruto as the protagonist. On AO3, it's Sakura. My best suggestion is maybe making spin-off stories that follow each path that you want. So, as you think of it, and if you really want to cover Sasuke's story or what Sasuke is doing at the time, you just update the story about Sasuke being the main character. There are also a lot of things you add that have a lot of implications that really upset the power dynamics of the universe. Again, the last chapter was named "Consequences," so I hope to see consequences. I hope the gods and the factions go to war. That would be a very interesting and unique take that I don't think has ever been done in a crossover Naruto fanfiction with High School DxD. This would be a great way to address the power imbalance and how certain characters have been killed off and how certain things can't happen because these characters have been killed off. New technologies or new abilities that change things happened.

Another thing that I noticed a lot of fans either like or didn't like was Gojo. I understand what Gojo's narrative was in the story, but I hope you find a way to get rid of him. But that's just me as a singular fan. Some people pointed out how you heavily overstated his abilities, which I would agree with, but again, this is your story. He's completely out of his universe and out of his element, so you kind of had to mold, and you can mold him any way you want.

Before I forget, I'm not sure if you mentioned this before or anything like that, but if you do come back, could you tell us who's going to be paired with who? Like, if that's not going to narratively ruin things or set you in a certain path or position. I really, really hope there's one story I won't read because it

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