Reviews for Shadow Of The Crimson King
Guest chapter 14 . 11/20
We need 15
Glitner chapter 5 . 9/26
yep i tried one more chapter .. and i gotta say im not suprised that im dissepointed ... this really feels like a 13 year old wrote everything... there is really no tought behind the things that happends and the plot is pure chaos and not in a got way it just feelt like everything that happends is being pulled out of ur ass the same time u write it down , like i said no tought behind the plot.. u have taken to reeaaally loved fiction and made a fanfiction of it but u made it super wierd and super boring ... random dudes amd duddettes just pops up from nowhere the dragon lady is so forced that it just so forced and the new yandere woman is also forced honestly to only good job u did was to kill his parents cuz thats the only thing i can take satesfaction from cuz i hate the mc you have written - i hope you will foever smell like shit and woman will keep distance from you irl ! byebye
Glitner chapter 4 . 9/26
you should just have made entropy save him and given him the system .. you took away any tension at all with im there ... and even if something bad happends to issie welp thats just forced plot not cuz we know that entropy could have done something about it ... so u kinda fucked urself in the ass hard time... and the system makes no sense...
you gained the skill " sword master" thats not a fucking skill thats a title .. it should been named sword mastery or something ... it feels like this is a system that a 10 year old came up with everything feels so forced issie feels exactly like he did b4 he died he have not matured or antything this is just liek reading cannon but with issie having a super being doing everything for issie while he himself dont need to do shit sure he does some fighting but he neither have skills at it cuz the system just keep spitting new things at him so he becomes stronger rather then skilled and if he wants something he wil just ask etropy for something like his fire skill lol ? .. " can i breath fire" here have dragonslaying magic ! lol fix ur fucking story i jsut read it cuz i litteraly had nothing else to read
Uday Sra chapter 15 . 9/24
M3troProductions chapter 14 . 7/18
Not sure if youll see this but i really hope you continue this sereis it's an incredible story and I feel like you did an absolutely amazing job on all aspects to the fix. Hope this finds you in good health
zNightMxre chapter 7 . 6/20
Remember this issei with great power comes great big booty bitches xD
teamo12peri chapter 14 . 5/10
I'm glad your useless ass hasn't updated this story because you're a useless motherfucker
teamo12peri chapter 3 . 5/10
You're either wanking off the DXD verse or are a dumbass motherfucker who hasn't read the solo leveling manga at level 130 sung Jin woo was a multiversal level being yet you wank the dragon gods to level 10k the fuck is this useless scaling useless motherfucker
teamo12peri chapter 2 . 5/10
Yeah no this is straight wank trash
teamo12peri chapter 1 . 5/10
Masterboy chapter 14 . 3/2
Efthee chapter 11 . 8/23/2022
that was quite bad writing at the end with asia's character but meh she is a side character so yeah
Guest chapter 14 . 7/24/2022
I really want to see more I can envision the story when I read it and it's simply amazing
RenModuo chapter 9 . 7/16/2022
Bruh, this chapter got me deadass rolling in bed with laughter. Thank you for writing this.
Guest chapter 14 . 6/13/2022
Really enjoyed the story you wrote you have talent
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