Reviews for Julie and Luke |
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![]() ![]() The story is amazing ... maybe not put too much detail on the "gay" stuff. I don't hate the People, I just strongly dislike and don't support what they do. but from author to author, it's amazing. |
![]() ![]() Honestly- I really enjoyed reading this. This was exactly what I've been looking for after watching the series. :) |
![]() ![]() Schreib bitte weiter so |
![]() ![]() Schön deine Geschichte |
![]() ![]() hey I love this story so much and really like all of the scenarios you've made if you're open to it then I'm asking you to please make a chapter that somehow ends up in Luke and Julie cuddling. It's just a suggestion but I hope you will do it. As I said before I really love this story and I hope you will keep writing till you don't want to anymore because you're a talented writer and yeah that's just about all I wanted to say. Hope you have a great day. Mathilde. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am just imagining Flynn’s entire family just watching Julie kiss air. Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() Chapter 24 where you did boulevard of broken dreams was the best! I love green day 3 |
![]() ![]() A for the hot kissing scenes as usual, I love them, but I got confused with some parts in this chapter, like, how luke is speaking in the mic in front of everyone, reggie handing him his guitar, no song was being played, alex taking the cake to the stage, it was kinda confusing, but hey, poetic license, eh? |
![]() ![]() they're soooo cute together! |
![]() ![]() hot hot hot oh my! i just want more of this last part, please lol |
![]() ![]() I really love the way you insert some real lines from the series like "anything for you, Julie, you know that" and it makes me SEE and FEEL him saying that. You've been doing this along other chapters too, and I DID NOTICE IT, even though I didn't comment about it before. |
![]() ![]() their make out seshs are getting hotter, hope there's more to come lol |
![]() ![]() I'm so into your story, reading one chapeter after the other that I forgot to leave comments, sorry! I'll try to comment more, congratulations! I'm loving it! |
![]() ![]() If you want some ideas for new chapters if you are going to do those these here are some 1- julie could have gotten no sleep last night or the night before but she didn’t want Luke to worry so she hadn’t been telling him and then somehow he finds out and is worried about her but Julie just said she was fine and that it was cause she was working on music in her room and it wasn’t a big deal. Then the next day Julie could pass out during rehearsal sometime and none of the boys know what to do so they run into the house to find carols and write down on a paper next to him that Julie passed out. So carols runs to the shed and finds her dad to tell him what happened. then she goes to the doctors and they says she’s fine she just needs to get some sleep. But again she doesn’t get any sleep, so the next day she passes out again but this time she hit her head really hard on the ground so she gets a concussion… Luke doesn’t know what to do because he is freaking out about this whole situation and stuff. |
![]() ![]() AHHHH THESE ARE SO GOOOOD! I CANNNNTTTT! Please make more I’m begging! Like I hate reading and this is just so good and ugh I can’t even describe it! I LOVE THESE!️️️️️ PLEASEE PLEASE MAKE MORE! And if you do could you ad a little spice to one of Julie and Luke’s kisses? THANK YOU!️️ |