Reviews for The Dread Lord of Essos |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wonder if the women will ever find out he had clones with the other women as well and will they know how to tell when he is there or just controlling them. glad he decided not to kill the kids. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() okay, glad to have some plot progression. it's been pretty slow going for the last ten chapters or so. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! you deleted your story on AO3? can't find it anymore |
![]() ![]() ![]() Certainly not a bad opening chapter, although the paragraphs near the end could probably use some spacing. anyway, thanks for the chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have mixed feelings about this story, the Patreon why would you do that with other people's work, the pace these new chapters have, the whole updating schedule and the fact that at this point you make us wait for a long time only to give us porn we didn't ask for, like if you want to write porn without plot AO3 is filled with such, you are constantly leaving certain characters like Missandei and the black pearl maybe that being said I think the initial idea was brilliant and hope to have the story I started reading back. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im gonna be honest. This story has devolved into textbased porn. These days around 50% of each chapter is about fucking if not more and the story is taking a backseat that I honestly have no clue where its going or have recently been. So this is me getting off this train since I cant find the motivation to read this which is a shame since in the begining it was pretty good. |
![]() ![]() im really getting tired of coming to new chapter and all it is is a fucking sex session that i tend skip over god damm waste of my time |
![]() ![]() ![]() And now I'm dropping this fic for good. I enjoyed it in the beginning, so I kept reading despite the RAPID deterioration of quality and every chapter having multiple sex scenes - which, I guarantee you, is the MOST BORING part of this whole fic - but now there isn't anything else I can justify this fic with, all you write is REALLY poor smut. And now 'Harry's' just a straight up pedo. Goodbye. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well this turned Pedo quick. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting read for a crack fic. Might sound dumb but it like to read version of this story thats not all smut |
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![]() ![]() ![]() And his collection of Stark women is complete! He sure know what to do and to say to obtain what he wants! XD Keep it up! |