|Reviews for Children of Pride|
| spaceystacey chapter 1 . 6/9/2003
Wow, what an unusual story! I haven't read too many fanfics, but I think your story will end up being a really memorable one for me. Actually, I found the descriptions of the physical pain the characters went through to be really scary. I am definitely going to read your other stories, the Hawaii 5-0 ones, too. I love Hawaii 5-0!
| Slacker Queen chapter 1 . 6/6/2003
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR POSTING THIS PART!
This fic was great. That Yakwur thing sounds scary and disgusting. Poor Richie, to have something growing in him. *Shudders at the thought*
Great job girl! LaterZ!