Please go on! This idea is brilliant!

I can't wait to see where you'll take this! There are some mistakes with your grammar so far, but it's still enjoyable to read, keep going

Oooooooooo! I can’t wait for next chapter! This is great!

I'm surprised Percy didn't punch Harry in the face for blowing up at Sally (his mum) like that. Also is Annabeth going also or will they be separated. Personally I don't think they should be separated as they swore "never again" to each other

This is really good! How often will you be updating?