Reviews for Harry Potter and the Perfect Wife
The Edible Scump chapter 1 . 11/7/2020
A fun read. Thanks for writing
Guest chapter 1 . 11/7/2020
That was a fun read! I *think* I came across a story like that in the past, but that doesn't have to be a bad thing. Thanks for sharing!
DriftWood1965 chapter 1 . 11/7/2020
That was amusing. Thank you.
rb2312 chapter 1 . 11/7/2020
Absolutely brilliant story.

Can just see daphne coming to love harry. Even calling him by his first name. Yet still continuing with her hobby of trying to kill him.

And love the idea of their new pet. Can just see the kids when they eventually have them, playing with minny as they grow up. Think there will be a lot of kids.

Not sure how the head lioness will react to having a nundu named after her. Or how friends and family will take the news.
Though i can see a scene where harry gets minny to spit out draco and tells her he is not a chew toy

Well done
Guest chapter 1 . 11/6/2020
Classicly hilarious, is there a next chapter?
JakOvsumTrade chapter 1 . 11/6/2020
Pretty good one shot. Up there with some of the better comedy ones I have read, though not at the level of the best over all. For a first time, really good.

A bit more practice and I can see you going far. I noticed a couple of typos, too, so consider reading over your work carefully before posting. Things like that separate those at the top.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/6/2020
This is hilarious.
digitalastronaut chapter 1 . 11/6/2020
awesome story
lunadream13 chapter 1 . 11/4/2020
great story!
Valiryo chapter 1 . 11/4/2020
Entertaining fic, my only criticism would be the dialogue.. it just didn’t sound natural to me.
MysticTraveller chapter 1 . 11/4/2020
Damn good chapter, interesting premise, harry being aloof while still a force to be reckoned with is a perfect combination. Daphne is also a wonderful boon to the story. Her schemes are funny since they are doomed to fail from the start. Hope to see more.
niybruh chapter 1 . 11/3/2020
Great story.
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