I am very pleased to be the first to review this chapter. I am enjoying this story very much. Keep up the good work.

Yoshi likes his booms. Love it as always

Really nice first chapter

Excellent grammar and descriptive story telling, great read

Hype? Are you only 2 weeks ahead on discord. If so shame my dog could do better. Granted it wouldn’t be the same quality but she’d write more. Tst tst

Niceeer

This was a wonderful chapter. Also...cccp...second.

C3 review #1 suck it cccp :-)

Having coming here from your little promotion on The Ashes of Chaos, I really enjoyed the first chapter of your new AU story.
I might need help with the ages here, and the grading system at schools because I'm from the UK and I get easily confused even with the Scottish/English schooling differences.
This is an amazing start and I'm really excited to read more!

Great start. Came across this by your reviews on Combattombat. Grammar is excellent and appreciated. Wondering how percy will fit into this story and whether he will take a main stage at all? Just a note, if you do plan to include percy meaningfully I'd recommend he takes centre stage if you want the story to blow up as OCs are hard to bond with as readers

I’d rather just read about ace not some redneck

Those two bastards C&C once again stole my first review. THIS IS UNACCEPTABLE THOSE BASTARDS TOOK WHAT IS RIGHTFULLY MINE DAMMIT. I SHALL LAUNCH A CRUSADE AGAINST THESE BASTARDS WHO STOLE WHAT WAS MINE BY BIRTHRIGHT

-RAVEN NEVERMORE THE RIGHTFUL FIRST REVIEWER

#reviewforalgo Traffic sucks and LA has shitty traffic. Go Cato!

Blatantly anti Cali, this is not ok. Manticore is cool. Cato seems like the kind of guy who’d try to sleep with the moon.

Great chap all in all

First of chap 2