...this feels like something you'd find on Wattpad...
And what's up with the MC's name? It's not good. The first name is just lazy, since you're Ace. If you look at this from a realistic point of view, what mother or father would willingly name their child 'Ace'? I'm not trying to sound like a dick, it's just his name is very... stupid. Iverson is fine as a last name, but Ace doesn't fit with it. Iverson sounds fairly Swedish/Norwegian, I'd expect the first name to match that or to sound more Canadian/ American. Ace is a name that only fits a dog, I say this as someone who's met a dog named Ace and never a person named Ace.

Love the story looking forward to more

Awesome Chapter Man

Seeing as I clearly had the first review, I would like to say that I enjoy your story very much and think that you and your betas did a wonderful job with it. Keep up the good work!

- Luq

I’m already looking forward to seeing the next chapter! I’ve been a big fan of Ashes of Chaos for a long time so I’m eager to see how you do in a different fandom.

-PhoenixFireII

This is fake news. The world knows that the other reviews are fake. All mail in reviews are fake. I WAS FIRST REVIEW! BY A LOT! Regress is fake news, can’t be trusted. Sad in these times that people lie and steal my firstness.

Btw love this fic, so glad it’s up now

Love it!

Fuck Reg and stealing my first review. Besides that loved the fic Ace.

If this has no references to Iron Maiden, or at least metal in general, I will be extremely disappointed. Especially if Thalia exists here.

Absolutely loved it like on the discord. I everyone who wants more should definitely check it out its awesome there. And u will meet some of the inspiration for some characters.

Absolutely amazing first chapter! I cannot wait to see what you do with this fic, your greek myth game seems on point as well- perhaps even better than Ricks, time will tell!
I think my favorite part of this chapter was the cutaway at the end, it leaves readers thinking about where the fic is going to go overall, and not just beyond the immediate plot development. Also, first?

intriguing read like most of ur books looking forward to more chapters

A great Beginning so far! As to be expected from you.

First