Pleaaaaaaase update this story. I am enjoying this story way too much for it to die here

So I just read through everything over the past few hours and I have to say that I have thoroughly enjoyed every second of it. Everything works. From character motivation to how the characters interact with each other. I have especially enjoyed everything related to the Xiao Long/Branwen household. I sincerely hoping that this is still being worked on and would love to see this finished someday. On a personal note, I am hoping for some reconciliation between Tai and Raven. I have to admit that I am a sucker for this pairing. The idea of the two coming back together and working past their previous issues to find love in one another again is a tantalizing one to me. The part when Tai leaves and Raven lets her walls down and embraces him while telling him to come back had me tearing up a little. In fact, I teared up at several other times as well. Like I said before, I have enjoyed this ride so far and wish to keep going until it’s end. Best wishes and happy writing.

I am considerably upset that this wasn't UPDATED FOR MORE THAN A YEAR

I think every huntsman/huntress should learn basic first aid. Advanced first aid (enough to be called a Medic) would be something a team member would specialise in.

The big theory I’ve always heard about Theo is that he is trans but we probably won’t know about that till next season. Ironwood is definitely being ironwood here am I sure that his mental stability will be maintained. Oz Is also being oz we will have to see if that doesn’t have any unforeseen conquences though. V5 is always funny to me cause it’s has great character stuff but the fang plot and big fight are both terrible. It’s nice that the show really picks up after it imo

I’ve really been enjoying this story. It can be a little tough to read given how much tai and raven are sniping at each other and how fucked up raven is but that’s not a bad thing. It feels more like what could have happened if raven went back

Ok what brilliant about this fic is that tai and raven are both at the worst here. Raven hasn’t completely bought into her bullshit to the degree that she will before yang makes that all crash down in v5. Tai is still destroyed by summers death and does not trust raven have obvious reasons. Raven is also completely fucked up by summers death which is not helping thing. Their are both just kinda terrible, raven more so than tai, and it works. This au also slots into cannon neatly with the point of divergence is that summer never asked raven to go with her on her final mission

This really good

Chapter 11?

I didn't dislike the second half of the chapter, but I suppose i can't help but be disappointed that so much time was dedicated to a plotline that might never come to pass.

In light of that, I hope you come back to this story at some point, not jsut because i desperately want to see more of this family dynamic, but also because it would be sad to see all the set-up in this chapter wasted

"I stopped watching after volume 5(no offense to those that enjoyed that volume" no, you should absolutely mean offense lol, I still watch rwby even now, but i have no illusions that it is still good(though I have to berudginly accept that I am enjoying volume 9 far more than i expected to), and especially volume 5. I know media is subjective and all that, but man I really cant fathom the idea that anyone would call that volume good.

Hearing you talk about far future plans for a story that hasn't been updated in 11 months hurts, I just hope this story has a decent end point. Regardless though i wont regret having read this, it's a very entertaining story

hmm, something about the way you made ozpin speak didn't feel right for me, I couldn't find his voice in my head like I could with the other characters... maybe not enough thoughtful pauses? or maybe the way he spoke just didn't sound agravatingly cryptic enough

I love that Raven's idea of deviance for kids shows is stuff like TMNT and power rangers, i think it does a great job of humanising her that she likes those.

I'd say its kinda strange to see Raven be able to care in this way with Ruby and Yang, but I suppose in this story the supposed turning point for Raven's point of no return is killing Spring, and she got taken out of that environment right before she hit it.

Love your story dude.
Raven is one of my favorite characters from RWBY, one of my Top 5. In case you're wondering, the other 4 are Yang, Neo, Blake, and Pyrrha (gone too soon, but never forgotten).

Anyway, since Raven is a favorite of mine, it bothers me how RWBY's story seemed to make her such a hypocritical and almost hated character due to her cowardice and her disregard for Yang. I think they could've treated her character better, and I'm sure I'm not the only person who believes that.

I sincerely hope this story isn't dead. It's the second time I've read through it and it was just as great as the first.

Also, the mental image of Raven defending Yang and Ruby from Tai is just awesome.