I can’t get enough of this

really hope that they eont be rap-d

Oh Draco boy you are a fool

The story is interesting. I just don't know where the actual conflict will occur from. it'll be interesting to see

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon

Considering the rules forcing Lord Black to marry the last Black females who are either unmarried or widowed, shouldn't Harry marry Narcissa now that Lucius is dead (god, had Draco been Lord Black, would he be forced to marry his own mother?).

Amusing to see Darwinism in action. Those lads are about to have a very, VERY bad time.

When reading this last bit I envisioned Galadriel making a comment along the lines "Did I accidentally apply to a conditioning camp for four rival cults instead of a school?"

Good chapter!
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Critique:
One error. You seem to have forgotten that Luna Lovegoode does NOT wear glasses, yet you have here wearing them here. you might want to edit that bit out.

Alone and soon to be on one way date with Neuronist Painkill

I am so sad that this is not getting an update but rather your other stories. As always great work and would love to see more

Oh look dead Slytherins they just don’t know it

Yay, Luna finally arrives into the mix, and man, she didn't disappoint. Even Gally here was taken aback by her. XD

I also love how she just accepted being her pet right off the bat, although whether or not she knows she wasn't joking is yet to be confirmed.

Awesome chapter.

thx for the chapter 3