|Reviews for The Ringbearer's Fate|
| Budgielover chapter 1 . 6/6/2004
What a agonizing moment to describe in a drabble. The detailing of the clothes was fantastic. I would have liked a little more dramatic buildup to the final thought, maybe a rearrangement of punctuation, like "The thought of their companion ... their friend ... being tortured..."
| Budgielover chapter 1 . 9/24/2003
Oh, well done. A strong visual picture with intense emotional overtones, all the format of a disciplined drabble. I repeat - well done.
| Imp chapter 1 . 6/6/2003
The idea of expanding on the emotions of those who see what seems to be the end of their friend is a good one, and I liked the bit that you showed, but it's bloody short. Now that's not necassarily the worst thing - but you really hardly have the time to get started before the end.
If you would, why don't you re-work it, expand it and upload it again? I'll certainly come and review again if you inform me of it updated state _. Keep writing. IMP