Reviews for A Flower for the Soul |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyed this, thanks. Will try some of your other stories. |
![]() ![]() Dumbledore is entering the conversation very late lol hopefully he doesn't make an error on information that is no longer true since Harry is no longer a Horocrux |
![]() ![]() I am enjoying this so far and honestly would have never paired Fluer and Harry together but the way you have portrayed them fits. I just hope to see more of Sirius and maybe Remus |
![]() ![]() ![]() it can sound sappy but I love epilogues with a real happy ending |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't believe I feel sad that Tom Riddle died. Seeing is believing |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m so confused why he’s still talking about rebuilding his family fortune… Didn’t the goblin say it was only like 300k Galleons or so originally before it was squandered to the like 120k that it is when Harry first goes to Gringotts? If so he already has like more than twice that 300k…? He got like 800k for the basilisk venom alone didn’t he? And his house was only like 120k and that was his biggest purchase he has made….? Should still already have well over half a million galleons… |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice work |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am very pleased to read that Harry didn't die at the end of the story - so many do let him die at the SIRIUSly Riddikulus age of over 200 - some even reach 300. Thank you for writing this story - I have enjoyed reading it a lot. PS: I have clicked the box - Favorite: Story. PPS: I have also clicked the box - Favorite: Author. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The Ernesto's part made me remember a story I read easily 20 years or more ago that mentioned the restaurant and it's food. I'm not sure if it is a real place in the books or if it's just coincidence. I can't remember the story's name but it was my Michael Wilson (aka Wyrdradio) and it was a Harry Potter/Buffy the Vampire Slayer crossover where Hermione and Xander are cousins. |
![]() ![]() ![]() im loving how hermione and ron are still helping him even if they are just acquaintances in this book. ive grown tired of the major bashing of ron and hermione trope and this is the most interesting and fun book ive had in months and im only on chapter 7! ive followed and downloaded and favourited this book :D |
![]() ![]() I've never cried for a book. Whether it be a novel or a fanfiction. I've never cried. I suppose that changed today. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I dunno if you just using Ai to write this story and that's why the romance feels terrible but it is terrible. It's a lot of repetition and honestly feels soulless. In fact most of your stories the romance is soulless. The stories themselves are actually not bad but the romance always feels lackluster like it's a second, no third thought. Please brush up on that skill it'd be much appreciated. |
![]() ![]() Never , ever write anything romantic or relationship wise ever again. You are a troubled human being. You are ruining every story with your issues. Making the main character actually dumb and controlled by every female. The relationship you are trying to portray is a true abomination. |
![]() ![]() Now that harry collected the three hollows, i m hoping that at the end of a happy and long life with delacour he'll meet death and then decide to be reborn in tom's time and this time he'll give riddle a better childhood and a second chance. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Desde ya sé que un día Harry tendrá que despedirse de ese Tom que tiene en su cabeza. Es triste, es lo único que lo acompañaba durante todos esos años, el único amigo de la infancia de Harry Potter. |