Reviews for A Flower for the Soul |
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![]() ![]() ![]() An amazing story once again my friend. The fish one where the basilisk was a important someone. She was truly a gentle giant. Loved how you made the character and how harry went from someone with little people that he cared about to having many. Amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an excellent story. More romance and character interaction than adventure. I think every one would love to read this. There were very few spelling/grammar errors, so even someone without English as their first language, should have no trouble. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn didn't expect that Tom would die so early in the story I will miss him he was able to make good at the last of his life or something like that he is nothing like volddy. Goodbye Tom. |
![]() ![]() ![]() skimmed the chapter, meh |
![]() ![]() ![]() what all this lovelyness (sarcasm) seems to forget is that while yes, it should be her choice whether she takes the risk of being with him, it is ALSO HIS choice to take the risk to her, also its his choice to go out with her, you can't force him into a relationship with her. This argument is a trope at this point. I choose to not do something because its a risk to someone else. someone else says its not your choice how you personally act uno reverso what also didn't this start with her wanting to appolagise for initiating the kiss... where is the apology for that. does every woman character have to have the plot twist a second plotpoint into the man being somehow wrong first so he appolagises even when she does something she thinks is wrong... then the woman scary trope... I know its easy to write, but really. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Goddamn. I didn’t realize how many different stories and pairing you have in my top list of books. It’s actually auditioning |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg Im so glad i read this again and actually finished it. I was so devastated that Tom was killed the first time that i stopped reading it lol this is amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m so mad you killed off Tom. Whyyyy? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the part where you forgot Harry has all his OWLs and two NEWTS. He is, by canon, a legal adult. He is allowed magic and can leave Hogwarts. Are you an idiot, or forgetful? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for the story. Did the remainder of the DEs get caught? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry should have also made a point of having an Oath given to do what is best for the country while in office. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder if Harry can enchant the arm to act as a focus, or make it turn into a shield? I wonder what method of incapacitation they will come up with that will let Harry strike back. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why doesn't the wards of the house protect the family it is tied to...has Lucius given over control to Voldemort? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do hope Serena cannot read, especially English, or Harry may have a problem when she sees the tombstone. |
![]() ![]() ![]() One two he is coming for you, three four ward the door, five six, enchant the crucifix, seven eight you are too late, nine ten you will never see the dawn again. |