Reviews for The First Pillar
TheNameIsSpace chapter 5 . 1/12
Very enjoyable
wildarms13 chapter 5 . 1/12
eiii nice an update! awesome chapter
0vrLrd71 chapter 1 . 1/12
Yknow... I expected it but first it was all emotional and sht and then all of a sudden there's a change in scene going "and then the next day came" that I forgot all about my feelings and just laughed, that's... it should even be funny but damn

I'm surprised I didn't even bother checking your profile even though I love your other work... thankfully I still go find this, I already love the story- and it hit me in my feels

mhm, I wonder if you'll 'awakenOP reference lol) his quirk in the future... though that could have been what happened this chapter...
Spartan3909 chapter 5 . 1/12
Thanks for the chapter _.
Shin chapter 5 . 1/12
Aaand Mei is..Mei..lovably insane and hyper focused on her work lol. I'm liking where this is going, I know you do good work. I'm a big fan of your Jinchuriki of the World Eater fic, especially since at the time I was on a heavy Skyrim kick..hope you'll update that one eventually..but anyway. I like what you've done with Izuku's Quirk and I noticed something key, you pointed out quite early that he can feel the calcium in his bones and use his quirk to boost that so I have a feeling he won't be breaking his bones as much once he gets One For All which was one of the big things holding him back. Also yeah..Toga is very sympathetic once you learn her backstory and the fact Quirks are a big part of a person, it's very easy to see how repressing it could cause someone to turn as crazy as she did in canon..also she's VERY catlike in this fic, I've noticed quite a few times she's batted around balls that Izuku has made with his Quirk like a ball of yarn or when she played with the dangling wires in Mei's shop. And if Katsuki is gonna be part of the harem she's got work cut out for her with Toga seeming to be the head girl, and I can see Mei being part of it, especially cause now that Toga knows and will no doubt tell Izuku how she can literally work herself to complete exhaustion I don't think they'll leave her alone and constantly be on her case to get better rest and food.
doug89 chapter 5 . 1/12
I know absentee parents or guardians are an anime trope, but that's really concerning. She somehow went Wednesday, Thursday, and Friday completely absent, and no one checked on her. No parents, no school.

Hand her off to Bakugo's mother to get 'the talk'.
jayod chapter 5 . 1/12
Nice nice
SouruTV chapter 3 . 1/12
If this is TogaDeku I'm gonna love ya.
RookRaven chapter 5 . 1/12
I really enjoy your story. Keep up the great work.
Ironmchfn chapter 5 . 1/12
Christ this was a long chapter. I love it!
SouruTV chapter 2 . 1/12
Correction Izuku IS a Wuxia MC.
SouruTV chapter 2 . 1/12
This manual is as cringy as an Wuxia monolog...
smurr79 chapter 1 . 1/12
All my favourite MHA fix going atm, I love your Izuku and Himiko. Hell I love your everybody and watching them interact is awesome. I'm hoping I'm right and the infusion of one for all will supercharge his quirk enough that he'll be able to manipulate metal as well, cause that would be awesome. I'm just picturing the iron Man sit crawling up Tony's body but with Izuku.
RandomCoolGuy chapter 5 . 1/12
Where else are you posting this?
ocomhdhain1 chapter 5 . 1/12
I'd pay to see All-Might eat Nezu.
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