Reviews for The First Pillar |
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![]() ![]() ![]() serration is cringe |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally metal |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly didn't expect much from this story at first but I have gotta say you got me hooked. I love stories like that ones that draw you in. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I had major Dante and Vergil vibes from that last bit. "Jackpot" |
![]() ![]() ![]() How did i not catch on that it was Warframe. I was an Excalibur main mostly cause "Keep Calm and Exhalted Blade" was what got me through a lot of crap that i didnt have the gear, time, or friends (or a clan) to otherwise get through. Rhino is a beast though, and is probably the most useful Solo Warframe i've ever touched. fuck everything in late/endgame cause it knocks you down flat. Rhino "you can kill me, but i will die standing, bitches." |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please, dont be discouraged. And ont let anyone persuade you with shitty comments. ive been focusing on this story and deeply invested in it. I truly want to see how you resolve and changethe character growth nd story arches you've already crafted and made possible. this story is genuinely one of the best MHA fanfics on this site. Your writing is so gripping and human in the way that it conveys emotion and subtlety. I'm really looking forward to the next chapters, So please. keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is this story dead? Its a shame when a well written fanfic dies prematurely |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bro is making me think of that scene: the sand man is born from spider man (3?) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hayausa Smash is still just fucking dope |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dope story, great concept and his power is sick. Toga’s a beast |
![]() ![]() ![]() Any fic that have bakogiu treat mc as shit but author make mc continuing seing bakogiu a better ligh is trash, and clearly show the sick mind of the author |
![]() ![]() ![]() 15 chapters over 3 years means an average update of 2-3 months, and as of now it's creeping past 3. I can only hope that means there's still more coming and it's just taking awhile because quality takes time. This is really good shit and I'd love to see more of it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() 10 to the power of 14 |
![]() ![]() ![]() So momo can create nearly anything even theoretical material and izuku’s quirk allows him to manipulate stone and metal etc, and the denser the material the higher the amplification he gets, so the best stuff he could use to make a full suit of armor would be osmium, it is the densest material on earth (1 cubic cm22.59 grams). But theoretically, Momo Could create something like (neutron star) which is (1 cubic cm 1014 grams) or 100 trillion grams theoretically it should be possible for him to manipulate it so if you want him to become a god, that’s how and that is, if I’m remembering correct how his quirk works This is my first comment. I don’t know if this is where I was supposed to put something like this here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was going well until 3 new characters joined his harem within a few paragraphs of their introduction without any development, feels like it was written by a different person |