Reviews for The First Pillar |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That was quite interesting and amusing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Scp has breached containment. I repeat Mariah Carey has breached containment. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the chapter 333 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't like the multi relationship you've got going, and I think you've spent wayyyy too long on the prologue. your writing is good, and so is how you've written his quirk. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kinda forgot y I ever liked this story. Now after reading up on it again, im seeing y: it had so much potential, and ur writing on a technical level is better than 90% of all MHA writers. Which is why it pisses me off just how dumb so much of its content is. The relationships, (if you can even call them that), needless plot elements, (why tf is there a mystic book), and immense amounts of Izuku worship make this read like a light novel. You have actual skill and dedicate it to the worst tropes in existence. Its a damn shame |
![]() ![]() ![]() So glad I found your story, I'm on a cross country road trip and it's been a wonderful read. It really hits all the marks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really liked that momma Midoriya backed up his dream even before the reveal, actually good parenting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not a fan of meneta but ya did him dirty. secondly Eraser head finally gets some flack for his stupid choices and its hand waved moments later. dude hes a good hero a SHIT teacher. he should not be teaching anyone under third year because of the way he acts. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I skipped half the chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dammit, I came back to reread this and couldn’t remember why I stopped at this chapter but i sure do now. Way too much harem, flirting, “romance”, etc. Really cool premise with the quirk, less interesting with him getting OFA, but it feels like it’s just a back seat idea to pad out a certain kind of Izuku. Hopefully not with more recent chapters but I’ll need a break before I continue. Again |
![]() ![]() ![]() inko is adorable |
![]() ![]() ![]() all the characters in this story don't really get jealous and I'm so glad to find a story with characterization like this, cause I haven't felt real jealousy since I was a kid so story's that include jealousy based drama are off-putting |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just a small rant, but I find it stupid how every single ff that has midoriya with a quirk, still manages to get called deku |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how you stretched out the timeline a little bit. I think the USJ happening in the first week is too much action too soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Regarding the girl's costume thing: how would they be aware of the latest advancements in material science and technology that produce Quirk enhanced fabrics? Like applying the principle of Lemillion's costume to other quirks? I can see Momo having the foresight for checking info about it, as well as submitting a comprehensive design, but the other girls are teenagers from a more typical background. Something like invisible fabric for Toru to still have a bit of protection from the elements, transforming cloths for Himiko, or perhaps fabric that Momo can produce things through. Or actual practical shoes for Ochako. Heels have to place in potential disaster zones with uneven ground. In short, the girls are not professional costume designers. The specs they picked are probably not going to be the best, at least not in the first iteration. And they are not going to be aware of all of the options they could use to make their costumes suit them better. And the support companies who make their costumes have a bias toward designs they were already successful, so if the request leaves gaps in the specs, they will fill them in with that bias: aka skin tight outfits for girls. See Ochako in Canon. |