The fanfic’s great. My only real issue is how you underpowered Percy. He fought gods, titans, giants, and came face to face with multiple primordials. Werewolves and Basilisks shouldn’t prove a challenge and yet he’s getting beat every time. You made the excuse that Percy is holding back, but with how his fear is him losing his loved ones, it would only make him embrace his power to protect his family and those he considers friends. Thus the excuse of him holding back his might wouldn’t hold credibility in reality.

Fred and George looking at the map and seeing Ron in bed with a Peter every night as if it’s normal lol. That was the one thing I never understood about the book. How did they just ignore that? Or not see it? Never made sense to me

Great job loved it thanks for all your hard work

What about Percy’s powers like his control over water and the abilities of the earth shaker

I hope that you are able to update this and the other stores soon because they are very good

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Celestial bronze isnt needed to kill magical creatures in the Harry Potter universe. Why didn’t Percy conjure a sword for his battle against the basilisk?

Percy not being affected by lycanthropy due to his divine heritage makes no sense as the curse originates from Zeus in Greek Mythology who cursed King Lycaon for serving his son's flesh to the god to test his wisdom

Great story, please update.

Sounds as if Perseus is dying. Is it that he’s being overwhelmed by his immortal power? Turning immortal through overuse of godly power? Overwhelming his mortal shell, so he’s using mortal magic to delay his ascension? Noticed he didn’t take ambrosia even when injured this time.

Just reviewed your story a few minutes ago and even pointed out something that i thought needed to work upon for the upcoming chapters, but i thought i didn't appreciated the story as i should have. I tried to review this on the last chapter but darn site says that we can't sent a review one a chapter more than once, so i'll praise the story on the second last chapter instead, here you go.
This is one of the best PJOxHP crossover i've ever read. You certainly put a lot effort into mixing the both worlds and did it brilliantly. Its was great to see an adult Percy helping out harry and other students of Hogwarts. Reading this story was certainly a great experience and i hope you keep writing amazing stories like this.

This story is truly brilliant but one thing crossed my eye that i have to point it out.
Your story is a master piece no doubt but Percy's character is too snappy ?, Like you used the expressions Snarled,growled too much that it looked like Percy is just some animal snarling and growling at anyone who didn't agree with him. he is too quick to angry from the looks of it.
Like even when harry spoke "seaweed brain" to call him when Sirius broke in to the Gryffindor room, Percy had already an expression of fury on his face when he appeared, without even knowing what was happening.
I hope you dont see this as a "hate review" but instead as "constructive criticism". but try use some other expressions for Percy's character instead of 'Snarled and growled' if you can.

One of the best fanfic cross overs EVER.

Finally! Actually good Slythirins!

He better become part of the order.

This is still one of the best written crossovers I've read in years top 5 for sure. The characters are written well the way it feels like Percy just fits in the HP world is phenomenal. Can't wait till the next chapter. Also I don't remember it being addressed at all, but did Percy get sent back in time or something?