Reviews for Fateless |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wish you would update this |
![]() ![]() ![]() OLCON! CEASE FATELESS HIATUS AND MY LIFE IS YOURS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, this is the third time I've read this great fanfiction, having come here with a lot more knowledge about the Universe, and my ADHD neural system has decided that I need to express my ideas about the V/Vs conversation with the Venusians. Firstly - "Ascension matrix", as I understand it, implies a plan to achieve the Age of Will. Considering the words about "bodies" and how effective they are, I am inclined to this option (Reminder - The Age of Will will occur only when humanity attains immortality. And this will happen only with the help of the Third True Magic. All people will become something like spirits, only they will have Magic Circuits and their body will consist of spiritons.) Secondly - "guide". It's more complicated here, but I'm leaning towards the idea that by this they mean *drum roll* Jesus Christ. Yes. I am inclined to believe that in Proper Human History he was a user of the Third Magic. And an Alchemist. A possible ancestor of the Einzberns? Thirdly - the "representatives" are obviously the other TYPEs. I won't even explain. PLEASE CONTINUE THIS FANFICTION. It is incredible, please, I'm begging. I like Fate too much. |
![]() ![]() PLEASE KING RETURN FROM YOUR HIATUS WE NEED PEAK FICTION FOR THE STARVING MASSES |
![]() ![]() ![]() I genuinely just assumed World 1.00 was archer's world Also has anyone noticed Shirou's name could be short for Superhero? S-hirou - Super-Hero lmao |
![]() ![]() ![]() A council of shirou is NOT what I expected at fucking all holy shit this fanfic is so peak. I genuinely appreciate the abridged shoutout. That was hilarious. Its also peak comedy how you used Angry mango for the place of anakin lmaooooo(they even have the same first two letters of their name). The Alaya-shenaningans was also really cute and funny In the chapter itself though, Crystalline Romans in the service of Mars(i could be wrong and they might only be in service of ORT) is tickling the romaboo inside me so good! It was brutal how fast you killed of some characters though(my heart weeps for castoria altho now im curious what the council would think of that). I hope you know what you've done. This council of shirous is going to be stuck in my head forever. The jokes are literally what I think of but exalted due to your skills |
![]() ![]() ![]() I almost cried with how fucking cool this chapter was. PATROCLUS, THEN ARCHER HERACLES THEN VENUSIAN ANGELS! FUCKKKKK The way they called this opportunity "a chance for a vacation" so casually too omfg. so godamn good. This was smooth from start to finish. we get to witness two artos fighting over riding shirou ;) and then we get to end off with venusians! speaking of the venusian part though, there's a typo(unless its intentional) where you wrote "Due tell" instead of Do tell |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was such a good fucking chapter. Perfection in written form if I'd ever seen it. Matter of fact ima stop my review right here. Any more unnecessary words would only taint the magnificence. ...Okay there's one slight mistake(i think?) You wrote miku instead of miyu in the "DOWN!" line |
![]() ![]() ![]() There's so much i wanna say but the one thing i wanna say most is to respond to your tldr: FUCKING BASED LETS FUCKING GOOOOOOOOO I genuinely respect it. I was feeling it too. Its weird that UFOtable just left og Fate to Dean despite the many mistakes DEAN make that they could improve on. Oh well. In a way, its a blessing. Because Ufotable didn't adapt Fate route, we get Fate/ess lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() my dumbass sent the review for the wrong chapter ugh |
![]() ![]() ![]() HOLY SHIT TWO SABERS!(TECHNICALLY 3 IG) This is actually so fucking hype omg. It really is a mirror to the fifth grail war huh. btw in the prev chap, in the starting paragraphs you wrote H instead of I? also CCCCC means 500? there's also a " after parchment in chap 4 |
![]() ![]() ![]() things are heating up! btw in the last chapter, in the repressed one part of your confusion corner, shouldnt it be undue confusion not undo? mb again if that was on purpose |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is so fucking loving it so far. if i had to rate, it'd be an easy 12/10. ahhhh my heart is grinning at how well written this fanfic is! one small thing though; "I’m a being from outside time, sent here due to my knowledge of you lives”there's a POSSIBLE typo in the 'you lives' part. it should either be a your lives or just your life. anyways im not an english expert though so sorry if that was written intentionally. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'mma need more of this |
![]() ![]() PLEASE COME BACK OLCON. WE MISS YOU SO MUCH. |