|Reviews for Chaotic Future|
| Balthanon chapter 1 . 12/30/2015
The severing of the Ukyo relationship with Ranma didn't make a lot of sense here. Because she didn't immediately call out the curse or say Ranma's life was horrible she's a bad friend? That was probably the most forced element of this first chapter, but there were definitely a few others as well that could use touched up a bit. (Ranma going back and forth with Skuld where one minute he's willing to ask her nicely to reverse it, then immediately calling her a tomboy again, for instance. Nabiki's behavior near the end as well.) There are also a number of fanon cliches that could probably be removed and characters that could be made a bit less two-dimensional as well.
Overall, interesting premise that I might come back to finish at some point, but the writing could use a bit of work to flesh it out and make it more believable.
| Ibskib chapter 7 . 9/9/2014
Such a shame, I was really hoping for something more ingenious than Ranma falling for Skuld, and apparently becoming 'his' wife, seems like a defeat to me in several ways, I ended up skimming through the last chapter.
I guess Ranma doesn't always win, I consider a change in sexual orientation just as much a defeat as being permanently locked, he did after do a complete 180 compared to the previous chapters (both of them did for that matter)
| Ibskib chapter 1 . 9/9/2014
I really hope this doesn't end up with Ranma staying locked and impregnated that would just about be his worst nightmare, and just the thought is abhorrent to me, I can't help picturing being in his shoes.
Of course the message just said "Your" as in Skuld's, which could be interpreted to mean that Ranma has to name Skuld's first born so there's a way out for him at least.
Skuld being locked doesn't mean that Ranma has to stay that way, after all Skuld was way over the line, so it doesn't seem impossible that Ranma could get Belldandy to do it after Skuld has cooled down, or if he can convince her that the honor among sisters thing would be a cruelty in this case.
| Miles'Tails'Prowers chapter 3 . 8/4/2014
rated K, really? I absolutely love this story, but there are some parts that make me question how you rate your stories. keep the story up though.
| BMars chapter 7 . 5/11/2014
This was a really good read! Totally different from the typical plot for this crossover!
| Kidan Yoshilda chapter 7 . 3/31/2014
You know I read this story three time, THREE time. and every time I read it it just get's better. By the end though I do wish that there was a follow up. you know have something unexpected happen add Add another Anime into the mix and what not, but now I understand that it ended on a happy note.
Thank you for writing a good story, mistakes and all.
| Grizzmon chapter 7 . 4/16/2013
Eeyup, Kami same had a plan, and it worked!
| Grizzmon chapter 6 . 4/15/2013
So Ranko wants to have Skuld baby, Kami-sama you are evil!
| Grizzmon chapter 5 . 4/15/2013
Well, Ranma is bullet proof? That's like cheating...
| Grizzmon chapter 4 . 4/15/2013
So, Akane is growing up?
| Grizzmon chapter 3 . 4/15/2013
Well, is time Akane learns to control herself...
| Grizzmon chapter 2 . 4/15/2013
You love to torture Ranma it seems...
| Grizzmon chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
Well, poor Ranma...
| Guest chapter 7 . 3/15/2013
| irnzenmonk chapter 7 . 2/23/2013
this is an awesome story ne
i love it