| Reviews for Pariah |
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   scyfly chapter 14 . 2/3 this negation field that sometimes works and sometimes doesnt is totally random. this story is not finished. it is abandoned halfway through bakuda's rampage and then a sudden epilogue |
| scyfly chapter 12 . 2/3 everytime oni lee teleports he leaves behind a clone. so how do three of him suddenly appear? if his clones could do the same he would be an unstoppable one man army |
| scyfly chapter 11 . 2/3 yes what could the girl named herren possibly have against taylor after she took two herren gangmembers... you need to be more subtle and less obtuse |
| scyfly chapter 8 . 2/3 you know that tinkers cant fight simurgh right? she just takes their tinkertech and makes shit worse |
| scyfly chapter 7 . 2/3 not much of this story makes sense to me, taylor should carry a heavy duty metal shield, wouldve solved most issues. it also seems to resolve fully around coil. why isnt cauldron interfering? there are so many threats taylor could take care off. |
| scyfly chapter 6 . 2/3 if shes not a ward then why does she need to participate in a pr event? |
| scyfly chapter 6 . 2/3 what do you mean 'we dont know if trainwreck came for me'? he specifically said 'he said it would work'. how much more evidence do you need. given the world she now lives in she should suspect it was a setup from the beginning. a ship delivery for a pushy client(accord) a crane breaking down so they call in their only option and then a villain with ordinance made for her... |
| scyfly chapter 4 . 2/3 this is a very weird time skip, you totally bypass the fallout, especially of finding out sophia is a ward and go straight to her being a prt flunky. and not to take out heartbreaker, no to take out juvinile tugs |
| scyfly chapter 1 . 2/3 if the enforcers were caught on camera trying to kill taylor why werent they arrested? |
| katmom chapter 14 . 10/12/2022 Thanks for sharing! |
| katmom chapter 12 . 10/12/2022 Ugh…Calvert…Coil… |
| katmom chapter 7 . 10/12/2022 Oh dear… |
| katmom chapter 5 . 10/12/2022 Sure glad I can click NEXT! |
| CMVreud chapter 14 . 7/24/2022 Ooooh, shiny. A lot of story, without so much plot. And I really like it, most of it. But the plot checks out and is logical. Nicely done that. I just hope she gets the Bounties on their heads. I wonder what happened to crazy Emma. |
| CMVreud chapter 13 . 7/24/2022 How it will be taken by the reader... hm, He feared her, he feared her power and in the end his power vanished just as he feared and he was killed seconds later, as he feared too. And all the kings men and all the kings... horses? Ah, forget it. He was on the height of the 'fear' moment and then got killed. 'Dis da good shit!' |