Reviews for Pariah
katmom chapter 14 . 10/12/2022
Thanks for sharing!
katmom chapter 12 . 10/12/2022
katmom chapter 7 . 10/12/2022
Oh dear…
katmom chapter 5 . 10/12/2022
Sure glad I can click NEXT!
CMVreud chapter 14 . 7/24/2022
Ooooh, shiny. A lot of story, without so much plot.
And I really like it, most of it. But the plot checks out and is logical. Nicely done that.
I just hope she gets the Bounties on their heads.
I wonder what happened to crazy Emma.
CMVreud chapter 13 . 7/24/2022
How it will be taken by the reader...

hm, He feared her, he feared her power and in the end his power vanished just as he feared and he was killed seconds later, as he feared too. And all the kings men and all the kings... horses? Ah, forget it.
He was on the height of the 'fear' moment and then got killed. 'Dis da good shit!'
CMVreud chapter 12 . 7/24/2022
CMVreud chapter 11 . 7/24/2022
So many nice dominos. I can't wait for them all to fall.
CMVreud chapter 10 . 7/24/2022
I can see why Accord would want to eliminate a snag in the rug, but I thing Maxie-baby is trying the soft sell, so it's f**king Coil.
CMVreud chapter 9 . 7/24/2022
"I work in accounting at MedHall."
So they try the soft-sell?

"They took them. They took my family."
Ooor just baiting her with important targets into a trap.

[later, after the portcullis and acid-stuff-monsters]

Oh, please, NO!
CMVreud chapter 7 . 7/24/2022
This smells so much like Coil.
Or Kaiser. But when in doubt blame Coil.

CMVreud chapter 6 . 7/24/2022
Ah, yes, the 'wtf, Emma is crazy' route.
Her behaviour never made sense to me in the OS, too. Well, except for insanity.
CMVreud chapter 4 . 7/24/2022
Huh? This chapter is downright fluffy.
I like fluffy.
Please keep it fluffy.
CMVreud chapter 3 . 7/24/2022
Wonderful form keeping true to the original.
Shifting blame, doing nothing, being idiotic assholes all the way. Fan-Fucking-Tastic.
ArachnidHiveMind chapter 1 . 6/27/2022
Almost immediately favorited because of that
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