Reviews for Kir-Ben 10: Poyo Force!
Thunder Dragon chapter 6 . 1/8
I just had a few ideas for the story. It is for the future and for Kirby's growth. Seeing as Dagon and Void Termina are no pushovers and even with the Ben 10 Crew getting some power ups, their is still no guarantee they could win so Kirby needs a team just like his adoptive dad Ben 10.

Now if this happens then I hope we see you tackle some original arcs for Kirby and Ben 10. Because I hope you adapt the plot of some of the Kirby games but in the style of the Kirby Anime and the Pre-Reboot Ben 10 continuity. That would be perfect!

Also if this is done right it could further expand the world of the story. Build up the threats of Void Termina and also Dagon if you go into Ben 10 Ultimate Alien. And maybe Ben and his network of friends and allies can be mentor figures for Kirby's team like with Meta Knight is doing her as well. That could aid in the growth of everyone in the story.

Now here is a short list of some of Kirby's official supporting allies and friends for his team.

Maybe Kirby eventually gets his own team made up of his teammates and friends from the various Kirby games. Maybe the Animal Friends from Kirby's Dreamland 3 can be creations or slaves of Doctor Animo and they can appear as Kirby's first team after being freed from his control. I am talking about bringing in Rick the hamster, Kine the sunfish, and Coo the owl. The other three, which joined the originals in Kirby's Dream Land 3, are Nago the cat, ChuChu the octopus, and Pitch the bird.

Gooey is one of Kirby's friends who appears primarily in Kirby's Dream Land 3, though he was first introduced in Kirby's Dream Land 2. He is a blue (sometimes purple or black) blob with a face and a long tongue. While he does not have any additional limbs, he can use his tongue to grab onto things, and stretch parts of his "body" to use as makeshift limbs when necessary. Gooey is the same species as Dark Matter, but unlike most Dark Matter, he has a friendly personality and no ill will. His appearance in Kirby Star Allies indicates that, though he is capable of speech, he knows little about himself or his identity.

Ribbon and her race could also appear in story if you decide to bring in Dark Matter.

Ribbon is a character who made her debut in Kirby 64: The Crystal Shards. She is a fairy from Ripple Star, serving under the planet's Queen, and watching over the Crystal - an object with the power to dispel Dark Matter. She forms one part of the Ribbon's Crystal ability, and is also paired up with Adeleine in Kirby Star Allies. The duo reappear in Super Kirby Clash, where the former watches as the latter paints as she usually does. Ribbon is rather small, about Kirby's height but much thinner than him. She has messy pink hair with a red ribbon (after which she is named), a red dress, white pants, brown shoes, and rosy cheeks. Her eyes are blue, and she is almost always seen with her mouth open.

Kirby is implied to have a crush on Ribbon and she also kisses Kirby in the true ending of Kirby 64: The Crystal Shards

Now here is Adeleine the token human of Popstar. Adeleine is the young painter that joins forces with Kirby in his quest to rid Dark Matter from his realm in Kirby 64: The Crystal Shards. She is a humanoid girl, which causes her to stand out greatly from many other Kirby series characters, particularly due to the fact that she stands at roughly twice the height of Kirby. Her name is a Germanization of the French "Adeline", which is diminutive for "Adele" (nobility).

Always seen with her easel by her side, she, with her art, regularly bridges the second and third dimensions; her paintings literally morph off of the page, ranging from enemies that Kirby can fight and defeat, to items like 1-Ups and Maxim Tomatoes that Kirby can actually use. In terms of dress, Adeleine most frequently dons a large red beret, green smock, and simple brown shoes, an appearance that changes in color only when playing the mini-games in Kirby 64: The Crystal Shards or recruiting additional Adeleines as Dream Friends in Kirby Star Allies.

Adeleine is not native to Popstar, having come from another world to study art. Her homeworld is left unspecified. So here is an idea, make Adeline be The Wizard of Team Kirby, Adeline could be the daughter of Wizard immigrants from Ledgerdomain who chose to live on Earth and Adeleine when she meets Kirby and Ben is now just manifesting her powers in the form of painting.

Daroach could fill a similar role to Kevin in Kirby's team. The guy who knows the galactic underworld after reforming.

Bandana Waddle Dee could be a liaison between the Plumbers and King Dedede as well as a combatant.

Dyna Blade could be useful as she is an enormous armored bird that acts as both a friend and a foe in Kirby Super Star (1996), and Kirby Super Star Ultra (2008). In her self-titled subgame, she destroys all of Dream Land's crops to feed her chicks. Kirby defeats her, not knowing this, so he ends up feeding the chicks with apples and teaching them how to fly. In "Revenge of Meta Knight", Dyna Blade returns the favor by successfully carrying Kirby onto the Halberd before the artillery forces her to retreat.

In Kirby: Right Back at Ya! (2001-2003), Dyna Blade is shown as a legendary bird that is worshiped by the citizens of Cappy Town. King Dedede hatches a plot to get rid of Kirby by tricking him into eating her egg, which infuriates Dyna Blade and causes her to chase and attack Kirby for much of the episode, until her chick appears and Kirby feeds it, placating Dyna.

And of course where their are Knights their have to be Dragons. So if you Bring in Landia, maybe after becoming an ally to Ben and Kirby Landia is the guy who knows about mystical artifacts and ancient relics as he has made it his job to protect the Universe from dangerous artifacts and them being misused..

Hey it fits the guy. Here is his description on one the Kirby Wikis. Landia, also referred to as the Guardian Angel, is a character in the Kirby series, debuting as an antagonist in Kirby's Return to Dream Land. He is a four-headed dragon that lives in the volcanic domain of the planet Halcandra, where he has protected legendary treasures and relics since the ancient times, most notably, the Master Crown.

And that is as far as I am going to go without spoiling any more Kirby games.
Thunder Dragon chapter 6 . 12/23/2022
I made a mistake for Julie and her growth. So here we are.

Please go with the high priestess of Void Termina's angle, but also you can bring in the Yugioh Dark Magician Girl and the Magician Girl Archetypes for Julie to gain more mystical powers as well as stand as an equal with her man.

As for her alien transportation and armor and weapons for her please bring in Ship and soon. Julie has not had enough adventures with just her, Ben, and Kirby, It would be good family bonding and another fun adventure for the three of them.
Thunder Dragon chapter 6 . 12/23/2022
Can I make another suggestion? It is for Ben's more mystical powers. Please Verdonna to try and push Ben to master his mystical potential and under her guidance learns to use Mana and then grows to become a master wizard after hitting the spell books.

Now seeing as you tend to sprinkle in some elements from some video games and maybe other anime and cartoons maybe you can do the same here. Maybe when you flesh out more about Charmcaster and her arc that was unfinished in Alien Force and Ultimate Alien.

And who is the most well know wizards in Ben 10? If you decide to delve more into the mystical than in the classic series that could serve as a tool for Charmcaster's redemption that never happened in the classic continuity.

Also maybe you can sprinkle in some elements from the Ben 10 reboot for the other characters to grow in power and also up the stakes.

Such as the Titan Gauntlets, the Grimoire of Archamada, Wand of Merlin and Charmcaster's Magical Rune

Now for Ben's growth as a Wizard why not look at The Dark Magician Archetype from the Yugioh Anime and Card Game and use the spells, rituals and traps as actual spells and rituals and the cards that have names of locations as actual locations in the story in Ledgerdomain.

Now here is a list of Spells & Traps that apply to the Dark Magician Archetype. Take a look at these cards and maybe see how you can implement them in the story. I will send some hints for how to use them but the rest is up to you. You can use these either for the good guys and their allies or for the bad guys.

Black Magic Ritual(Summoning Ritual)
Chaos Scepter Blast(Attack Spell)
Dark Burning Attack(Attack Spell)
Dark Burning Magic(Attack Spell)
Dark Magic Attack(Attack Spell)
Dark Magic Expanded(Spell that transfers power)
Dark Magic Twin Burst(Duo Spell used)
Dark Magic Veil(Concealment Spell)
Dark Magical Circle(Binding Spell)

Diffusion Wave-Motion(Attack Spell)

Magic Gate of Miracles(Magical Artifact)
Magical Dimension(Pocket Universe to be accessed for a quick escape or to draw power from)
Magicalized Fusion(Spell that can fuse certain elements, abilities,
Mystic Plasma Zone(Arcane World that can be accessed)
Pot of Desires(Mystical Artifact)
Pot of Extravagance(Mystical Artifact)
Sage's Stone(Magical Artifact)
Secrets of Dark Magic(Spell Book)
Secret Village of the Spellcasters(Hidden Wizard Village)
Soul Servant(Familiar Summoning Spell)

The Eye of Timaeus(Mystical Artifact to Summon Timaeus)

Wonder Wand(Mystical Artifact)

Magicians' Combination(Tag Team Spell)

But wait their is more!

Chaos Form(Magical Anime transformation). Dark Burning Magic(Attack spell). Dark Magic Attack(Attack Spell). Dark Magic Curtain. Dark Magic Expanded. Dark Magic Inheritance(Spell that Transfers Power). Dark Magic Twin Burst(Duo Attack Spell). Dark Magical Circle(Ritual Spell). Fusion Weapon(Magically crafted Weapon). Magic Formula(Spell Book incantation and also formula for a spell). Mystic Box. Sage's Stone(Magical Artifact) Secrets of Dark Magic(Spell Book). Soul Servant(Summoned Familiar).

Also seeing as their are magic books in Ben 10 Such as The Archamada Book of Spells and Charm Casters Spell Book maybe you can sprinkle in some other references from other archetypes from the Yugioh card game.

Such as the Spell Book Archetype.

Here are spell books from Yugioh that are based on actual historical books that Ben and Gwen and also some bad guys can use.

Here they are.

Spellbook of Eternity
Spellbook of Alma

Book of inspiration: Almanac

Spellbook of Fate
Spellbook of Goethe

Book of inspiration: Goetia

Spellbook of Knowledge
Spellbook of Ldra

Book of inspiration: Galdrabók

Spellbook of Life
Spellbook of Necro

Book of inspiration: HP Lovecraft's Necronomicon

Spellbook of Power
Spellbook of Hygro

Book of inspiration: Hygromanteia

Spellbook of Secrets
Spellbook of Grimo

Book of inspiration: Grimoire

Spellbook of the Master
Spellbook of Sefer

Book of inspiration: Sefer Yetzirah

Spellbook of Wisdom
Spellbook of Torah

Book of Inspiration: The Torah.

Now for Julie, Go with the high priestess of Void Termina's angle, but also you can bring in the Yugioh Magician Girl and Magician Girl Archetype for her to gain more mystical powers as well as stand with her man.

Now for Kevin and Ben and their growth. For Ben it is an enhancement of the Omnitrix and Ultimatrix.

You can use The Potis Altiare is a device that was created by the ancient Galvan as a device capable of multiplying one's natural abilities several times over.

The Potis Altiare looks almost identical to the Omnitrix, which is located at the top of this device. It is green in color and resembles mechanical materials. There are gear-like stripes running behind the Omnitrix symbol, and green wiring around it. There are black marks surrounding the symbol, as well as leaf-like edges. Once Ben transforms into an alien using it, the Potis Altiare is positioned on the Omnitrix symbol.

Maybe Vilgax shows up again like in the video game and looks for the Potis Altiare Ben and the crew are here to help stop Vilgax. But Ben, Kirby, and the crew have to collect the pieces of the Potis Altiare and it is after stopping Vilgax that Azmuth uses the Potis Altiare to enhance the Omnitrix, and the Ultimatrix and finally the completed Omnitrix which when Ben is proven worth now has all the powers of the previous watches.

The Potis Altiare is also used to boost Kevin Levin so he no longer goes nuts when absorbing alien Dna and Energy.
Thunder Dragon chapter 6 . 12/18/2022
I just remembered something for the future. If you bring in Void Termina then the Ben 10 cast need to power up.

First I feel that Gwen needs a power up to survive. But to do so we need to go over a summery about Mana and Magic.

Here is what I could find on the Ben 10 side.

Magic is the manipulation of energy and technology is just another way to control the process.

Magic is not as difficult as it seems. One can only know the secret true names of things. Understandably, magic does not work as well on Earth as it does in Legerdomain, the dimension from which all the magic in the universe flows.

Some humans (e.g., Hex, Charmcaster, and Darkstar) and certain species (e.g., Geochelone Aerios, and Thep Khufans) have more aptitude for magic than others, but theoretically any sapient species can potentially learn to manipulate mana through study and practice. Anodites, in particular, have a strong innate capacity for manipulating mana, and thus by extension magic, in all its forms. In terms of raw power, Anodites are stronger than even a master magician. For example, Gwen can use the more powerful spells in the Archamada Book of Spells, whereas Hex, a master magician, cannot do so without all the Charms of Bezel.

If one does not have the natural ability to manipulate magic, described by Charmcaster as having a magical aura, they would need magical objects. If they do have the ability, magical objects make the casting of spells easier and their effects more powerful.

Magic has no rules.

Speaking of Magic here is Mana (alternatively spelled as Manna)is the hidden mystic life energy found in everything in nature from aliens to humans to plants, Theoretically, any sapient species can potentially learn to manipulate mana through study and practice. While anyone can learn to harness mana, Anodites, a race of "energy beings", are entirely comprised of mana and thus have a strong innate capacity for manipulating it.

Magic
Main article: Magic (Classic)
The magic constantly utilized by both fifteen-year-old Charmcaster and ten-year-old Gwen in the original series is actually derived from mana, and skilled humans like Charmcaster or Hex are capable of harnessing it. According to Gwen, what Charmcaster and Hex refer to as magic is powered by mana.

A key distinction is that this form of mana manipulation relies on the casting of spells; a "spell" being the word used to signify the means employed to carry out a magical action. A spell can consist of a ritual action, a set of words, a verse, a gesture or any combination of these. Some spells may require celestial events (e.g. a full moon or a solar eclipse), and the use of talismans, potions and other ingredients to manipulate reality.

According to Charmcaster, all the mana in the universe flows from Legerdomain.

Energy Projection
Mana can be used in its raw form - as pure energy - for a variety of effects. Mana can be projected as a concussive force as well as heat, light, and even electricity; whether mana can be projected as other forms of electromagnetic energy is unknown. Mana can also be used to create energy constructs such as shields, domes, platforms or stepping-stones. Mana constructs are airtight, seen when Gwen used a mana bubble to deprive Rath of air and when she used a mana bubble to put out a fire. Constructs made out of mana seem to have similar properties to either glass or what appears to be metal. Experienced users seem to be able to vary the tensile strength of their mana shields to some extent, rendering it soft and yielding enough to cushion their fall from a great height. Mana constructs can be summoned by any part of the user's body (e.g. arms, legs, and feet).

Aura Reading and Dowsing

By reading another's aura, one can discern certain information surrounding said individual (e.g. their emotional state, intentions, truthfulness and illness). Dowsing is a related technique for tracking organic life through objects they have touched via their mana energy signature and finding out what he or she is doing at the time. According to Gwen, this form of tracking doesn't work well in an area with few living things and too many machines. Another weakness is if the person in question being tracked is "losing touch with them self", it makes their mana signature weaker and harder to track, as was the case with Jennifer Nocturne. Apparently, dowsing can still be used to identify someone even if the person in question is deceased, as was the case with Victor Valadis.

Reality Warping
Altering reality is probably the most extreme display of power derived from mana, and this has only ever been shown by Verdona. She was seen fixing a broken glass at Gwen's house, creating strong duct tape around Ben's mouth, conjuring/dissipating a disco ball, and repairing Gwen's home when it was damaged during their fight with a mere snap of her fingers. The latter also shifted Ben and Kevin back to their conventional forms.

Mana is a very high-quality energy, and is multidimensional. Also while one doesn't necessarily need mana to live, if they live they produce mana .Ectonurites are the only known species who do not have mana present in them so they are the exception. Life energy is a subset of mana.

Mana users can pool their powers together for a greater effect. There are other mana users on Earth than the ones who are known.

Anodites, a race of "energy beings", are entirely comprised of mana and can freely manipulate it to their every whim. Humans and Geochelone Aerios can be taught to manipulate mana to a lesser degree than Anodites. Absorbing an Anodite's powers doesn't mean one is capable of manipulating mana in all its forms, meaning that mana is a power that one needs to study.

Geochelone Aerios can't be harmed by mana, and additionally can learn to use it faster than some other species.

Verdona also made mention of a mana field and, aside from it being used as a method for communication, very little is known about it. Gwen made mention of a seemingly similar "energy field".

According to Verdona, most of her corporeal descendants did not inherit "the spark", the catalyst that allows for the innate ability to control and manipulate mana. This is not uncommon. Celestialsapiens can't manipulate mana directly. They would have to alter the universe to change the nature of mana first.

Mana in its purest form is pink. However, there have been a few exceptions: Due to not manipulating it directly and being badly trained, Gwen's mana was blue in the original series. Since she was a better magician than Gwen in their youth, Charmcaster's magic was more pure (i.e. her mana was pink/purple). Hex's own evil adds impurities to the mana he manipulates, hence he doesn't manipulate "pure" mana.

Now for Gwen and her power boost. Here are the Charms of Bezel and their powers.

The Charm of Luck and Probability
The Charm of Luck grants the wielder supernaturally good luck. This causes anything and everything to go their way, but only if there was a possibility of it going their way in the first place. It makes all of the possessor's endeavors succeed in a good way. However, any opponents that may happen to be nearby suffer from increased misfortune.

Charm of Resurrection
The Charm of Resurrection returns its host to life or makes them recover from physical wounds and injuries, and regain consciousness if the user is unconscious (after a short amount of time).

Charm of Pyrokinesis
The Charm of Pyrokinesis grants its host the ability to magically generate, blast, and telekinetically manipulate fire.

Charm of Telekinesis
The Charm of Telekinesis allows the wielder to fly through the air at incredible speeds and also have great telekinetic control and manipulation over multiple objects or people all at once.

Charm of Electrokinesis
Much like the Charm of Pyrokinesis, the Charm of Electrokinesis grants the wielder the ability to create, generate, control, and manipulate all forms of electrical energy at will.

The Keystone of Bezel.

The Keystone of Bezel increases all of the natural powers, abilities, and skills of the possessor, and amplifies the power of the charms tenfold.

Now for Kevin and Ben and their growth. You can use The Potis Altiare is a device that was created by the ancient Galvan as a device capable of multiplying one's natural abilities several times over.

The Potis Altiare looks almost identical to the Omnitrix, which is located at the top of this device. It is green in color and resembles mechanical materials. There are gear-like stripes running behind the Omnitrix symbol, and green wiring around it. There are black marks surrounding the symbol, as well as leaf-like edges. Once Ben transforms into an alien using it, the Potis Altiare is positioned on the Omnitrix symbol.

Maybe Vilgax shows up again like in the video game and looks for the Potis Altiare Ben and the crew are here to help stop Vilgax. But Ben, Kirby, and the crew have to collect the pieces of the Potis Altiare and it is after stopping Vilgax that Azmuth uses the Potis Altiare to enhance the Ultimatrix and it is also used to boost Kevin Levin.

Then Gwen gets a chance to restore The Charms of Bezel and she does and gets stronger eventually Gwen also has restored the Keystone of Bezel.
Thunder Dragon chapter 5 . 12/17/2022
I just realized something. If you bring in Void Termina then the Ben 10 cast need to power up.

I will send some ideas for the crew. First of is Gwen because I feel that Gwen needs a power up to survive against that cosmic bruiser. But to do so we need a review about Mana and Magic.

Here is what I could find.

Magic is the manipulation of energy and technology is just another way to control the process.

Magic is not as difficult as it seems. One can only know the secret true names of things. Understandably, magic does not work as well on Earth as it does in Legerdomain, the dimension from which all the magic in the universe flows.

Some humans (e.g., Hex, Charmcaster, and Darkstar) and certain species (e.g., Geochelone Aerios, and Thep Khufans) have more aptitude for magic than others, but theoretically any sapient species can potentially learn to manipulate mana through study and practice. Anodites, in particular, have a strong innate capacity for manipulating mana, and thus by extension magic, in all its forms. In terms of raw power, Anodites are stronger than even a master magician. For example, Gwen can use the more powerful spells in the Archamada Book of Spells, whereas Hex, a master magician, cannot do so without all the Charms of Bezel.

If one does not have the natural ability to manipulate magic, described by Charmcaster as having a magical aura, they would need magical objects. If they do have the ability, magical objects make the casting of spells easier and their effects more powerful.

Magic has no rules.

Now here is Mana (alternatively spelled as Manna)is the hidden mystic life energy found in everything in nature from aliens to humans to plants, Theoretically, any sapient species can potentially learn to manipulate mana through study and practice. While anyone can learn to harness mana, Anodites, a race of "energy beings", are entirely comprised of mana and thus have a strong innate capacity for manipulating it.

Magic
Main article: Magic (Classic)
The magic constantly utilized by both fifteen-year-old Charmcaster and ten-year-old Gwen in the original series is actually derived from mana, and skilled humans like Charmcaster or Hex are capable of harnessing it. According to Gwen, what Charmcaster and Hex refer to as magic is powered by mana.

A key distinction is that this form of mana manipulation relies on the casting of spells; a "spell" being the word used to signify the means employed to carry out a magical action. A spell can consist of a ritual action, a set of words, a verse, a gesture or any combination of these. Some spells may require celestial events (e.g. a full moon or a solar eclipse), and the use of talismans, potions and other ingredients to manipulate reality.

According to Charmcaster, all the mana in the universe flows from Legerdomain.

Energy Projection
Mana can be used in its raw form - as pure energy - for a variety of effects. Mana can be projected as a concussive force as well as heat, light, and even electricity; whether mana can be projected as other forms of electromagnetic energy is unknown. Mana can also be used to create energy constructs such as shields, domes, platforms or stepping-stones. Mana constructs are airtight, seen when Gwen used a mana bubble to deprive Rath of air and when she used a mana bubble to put out a fire. Constructs made out of mana seem to have similar properties to either glass or what appears to be metal. Experienced users seem to be able to vary the tensile strength of their mana shields to some extent, rendering it soft and yielding enough to cushion their fall from a great height. Mana constructs can be summoned by any part of the user's body (e.g. arms, legs, and feet).

Aura Reading and Dowsing
By reading another's aura, one can discern certain information surrounding said individual (e.g. their emotional state, intentions, truthfulness and illness). Dowsing is a related technique for tracking organic life through objects they have touched via their mana energy signature and finding out what he or she is doing at the time. According to Gwen, this form of tracking doesn't work well in an area with few living things and too many machines. Another weakness is if the person in question being tracked is "losing touch with them self", it makes their mana signature weaker and harder to track, as was the case with Jennifer Nocturne. Apparently, dowsing can still be used to identify someone even if the person in question is deceased, as was the case with Victor Valadis.

Reality Warping
Altering reality is probably the most extreme display of power derived from mana, and this has only ever been shown by Verdona. She was seen fixing a broken glass at Gwen's house, creating strong duct tape around Ben's mouth, conjuring/dissipating a disco ball, and repairing Gwen's home when it was damaged during their fight with a mere snap of her fingers. The latter also shifted Ben and Kevin back to their conventional forms.

Mana is a very high-quality energy, and is multidimensional. Also while one doesn't necessarily need mana to live, if they live they produce mana .Ectonurites are the only known species who do not have mana present in them so they are the exception. Life energy is a subset of mana.

Mana users can pool their powers together for a greater effect. There are other mana users on Earth than the ones who are known.

Anodites, a race of "energy beings", are entirely comprised of mana and can freely manipulate it to their every whim. Humans and Geochelone Aerios can be taught to manipulate mana to a lesser degree than Anodites. Absorbing an Anodite's powers doesn't mean one is capable of manipulating mana in all its forms, meaning that mana is a power that one needs to study.

Geochelone Aerios can't be harmed by mana, and additionally can learn to use it faster than some other species.

Verdona also made mention of a mana field and, aside from it being used as a method for communication, very little is known about it. Gwen made mention of a seemingly similar "energy field".

According to Verdona, most of her corporeal descendants did not inherit "the spark", the catalyst that allows for the innate ability to control and manipulate mana. This is not uncommon. Celestialsapiens can't manipulate mana directly. They would have to alter the universe to change the nature of mana first.

Mana in its purest form is pink. However, there have been a few exceptions: Due to not manipulating it directly and being badly trained, Gwen's mana was blue in the original series. Since she was a better magician than Gwen in their youth, Charmcaster's magic was more pure (i.e. her mana was pink/purple). Hex's own evil adds impurities to the mana he manipulates, hence he doesn't manipulate "pure" mana.

Now for Gwen and her power boost. Here are the Charms of Bezel and their powers.

The Charm of Luck and Probability
The Charm of Luck grants the wielder supernaturally good luck. This causes anything and everything to go their way, but only if there was a possibility of it going their way in the first place. It makes all of the possessor's endeavors succeed in a good way. However, any opponents that may happen to be nearby suffer from increased misfortune.

Charm of Resurrection
The Charm of Resurrection returns its host to life or makes them recover from physical wounds and injuries, and regain consciousness if the user is unconscious (after a short amount of time).

Charm of Pyrokinesis
The Charm of Pyrokinesis grants its host the ability to magically generate, blast, and telekinetically manipulate fire.

Charm of Telekinesis
The Charm of Telekinesis allows the wielder to fly through the air at incredible speeds and also have great telekinetic control and manipulation over multiple objects or people all at once.

Charm of Electrokinesis
Much like the Charm of Pyrokinesis, the Charm of Electrokinesis grants the wielder the ability to create, generate, control, and manipulate all forms of electrical energy at will.

The Keystone of Bezel
The Keystone of Bezel increases all of the natural powers, abilities, and skills of the possessor, and amplifies the power of the charms tenfold.

Now for the rest of the crew maybe you can pull from some of the games. I think the Potis Altiare can help boost the good guys.

If you are not aware the Potis Altiare is a device that was created by the ancient Galvan as a device capable of multiplying one's natural abilities several times over. It debuted in Ben 10 Ultimate Alien: Cosmic Destruction. In Cosmic Destruction six pieces of it are scattered all over the Earth. In the end, Ben uses it to power-up Way Big to defeat Evil Way Big.

Maybe that can allow Ben and Kevin to power up against Void Termina after Gwen rebuilds and restores The Charms of Bezel as the crew have to grow in power to stand a chance against that cosmic power house.
Thunder Dragon chapter 6 . 12/10/2022
Now here is something you will need to think about If you are going to take this story into Ben 10 Ultimate Alien.

You are going to have to look into what I feel is it's main theme. That Power Corrupts even the most virtuous and how one must learn to refuse it if it corrupts you or you will become a monster.

Lets break this down. Starting with The Ultimatrix.

Remember the Ultimatrix, while started by Azmuth, was completed by Albedo, who was a villain. Unlike Azmuth, who is a Technical Pacifist, Albedo designed the thing to be a weapon. It's much more fight-oriented than the Omnitrix, can turn the alien into stronger, more aggressive versions of themselves. It lacks the more benevolent functions, like the ability to heal genetic damages. Azmuth doesn't just disapprove the Ultimatrix and treat it like inferior because of the poor manufacture or because the fans think it sucks, he also dislikes it because it's a weapon, despite Ben's denial.

This is even visible in the flaws: in Ultimate Sacrifice, Ben finds out the Ultimate Aliens have become sentient, and he is hurting them. This is eventually fixed by Azmuth, but this proves the Ultimatrix has bad effects. Moreover if you closely follow the show Ben, while initially careful to use the Ultimate Aliens, starts abusing of them more and more easily, sometimes outright going Ultimate from the beginning. He even acts needlessly aggressive, pursuing Albedo despite the guy not being a threat anymore at this point. He doesn't exactly get drunk with power, but it's close.

Aggregor, who is the villain who questions Ben's idealism. Aggregor, being a major challenge, plays a large part in leading Ben to go this direction. Like Vilgax, Aggregor can't be reasoned with; he is a Sociopath who is willing to coldly kill anyone to achieve his plans. Also, importantly, he is a very smart, competent villain: for most the show, he smarts Ben and his team, often easily using them to reach his goals by taking advantage on their good nature.

For example, he easily gets the Alpha Rune from Adiwayta because they were busy helping Charmcaster, and picks up the aliens by taking advantage on the heroes trying to help them go home. Even when trying to do the right thing by helping the guardian of the last piece of the Map of Infinity, letting his heroic nature getting the best of him in the process, Ben ends up helping Aggregor. For the first time since the whole franchise started, Ben finds himself in a situation where he is constantly getting bested by his opponent despite his efforts. And unlike the Hightbreeds, it's an enemy far too ruthless to be reasoned with.

This as a whole, probably makes Ben reconsider his role as a hero; he does realizes that at several points, trying to do the best thing to help people around him played against him when faced with Aggregor, something Azmuth calls him out for. He is starting to question himself, to wonder if maybe trying to not make any sacrifice isn't always the best choice, that he might need to make sacrifices for the best of everybody.

This is seen when Kevin 11 Returns. That is Ben's first test.
Then, after they finally defeat Aggregor, Kevin goes psycho again and take over as the main villain. Ben is once again, blaming himself for what happened, since he was the one who trusted Kevin to join them in the first place, and did so too quickly. Keep in mind that this is the third time, if you take in account the original show, that he offered Kevin a second chance or an alliance and ended up being betrayed. He is now starting to believe that he was wrong to begin with, and should never have trust Kevin in the first place.

As a result Ben starts believing that the only way to deal with Kevin now is to kill him. Ben doesn't like it, but he feels like after so many attempts to help him, this is the last resort. So he inhibits his merciful side, and tries to put Kevin down. Ben feels like Gwen is defending Kevin because he used to be her boyfriend, and as such shrug off her suggestion for a saner solution. Ben basically acknowledge he did mistakes, but he assumes wrongly that going with his principles was a bad idea as well. Plus, Paradox told him he knew what decision make, and he believes this is the moment of truth. Fortunately, Gwen is able to convince him at the last minute to try a better solution, and he barely avoids Jumping Off the Slippery Slope. It still comes close though, and his more authoritative issues aren't fully solved.

Another theme in Ultimate Alien is Fallen Heroes.

If you take a closer look, the theme of Fallen Hero is extremely recurring in the show as a whole. Kevin, while he was a reformed criminal to begin with, could count, but you also have Captain Nemesis and Eon. Both are good examples: Captain Nemesis is a major case in that he used to be one of the heroes who inspired Ben, a guy who he look up to. In the end, Captain Nemesis let himself consumed by envy and greed, corrupted by his own fame. Worst, he actually became a murderer, something Ben had only seen with his worst enemies so far. This makes it even more of a shock for Ben, who cannot believe a guy who used to be a great hero ended up turning in a monster.

Then comes Eon. As revealed by the end of the episode, this Eon is none other than an alternate future version of Ben himself. This time, Ben is directly confronted to the possibility that he might himself become a villain, just like Captain Nemesis did. The reason why is left unclear, and Eon eventually is erased from existence, but the possibility remains.

This is also shown with Old George, a mirror to Ben. When we are introduced to Old George, he turns the Forever Knights back into a real threat, causing them to actually murder a character and start a purge against aliens. This once again, leads Ben to almost go against his rules, and threaten to kill Driscoll. However, there is more than that in George himself.

George just like the previous example, is a Fallen Hero. However, he is a different kind than previous ones. He is not consumed by some kind of dark side like Kevin was. Old George is not motivated by greed or envy like Captain Nemesis. He is a Hero Antagonist, who truly believes he is doing the right thing and actually follows heroic goals and ethics. He also is, much like Ben, a guy who got his weapon from Azmuth, and is annoyed by Azmuth wanting to control him. In many way, he is a twisted mirror to Ben... and what Ben might become later.

This is seen in "Ultimate Enemy": This is the final test, and the game of mirrors continues.

Vilgax, Ben's Arch-Enemy, take Diagon's place after George's death. Similarly, Ben picks George's sword and take George's place: he is now closer to be like George than he ever was. Except he has much more power, having at his disposal Diagon's powers, the Ultimatrix and the sword after winning. Vilgax is smart about that and tries to be a corrupting influence, telling Ben to use the power. More than ever, Ben is confronted with the same test than George was before him. Eventually, Julie's intervention allows him to overcome it: he chooses, despite having more power than he ever had before, to not let himself be corrupted by it, and uses said power for the strict necessary before handing over the sword to Azmuth.

The risk has passed: Ben hasn't succumbed to the temptation. Azmuth is satisfied with this, and decides he is ready to be trusted, destroying the Ultimatrix that was the initial source of his temptation and handing him over the new Omnitrix.
Thunder Dragon chapter 6 . 12/10/2022
If you are going to implement more elements of the show that did not make the cut then here is a resource you will need.

Stories based on the original Ben 10 Show were featured in the earlier issues of Cartoon Network Action Pack. As the comic book continued publication, it stayed up to date by switching to adaptations of Ben 10: Alien Force and Ben 10: Ultimate Alien.

Alien Force stories were featured in Cartoon Network Action Pack, the last comic book series consisting of comic stories based on Cartoon Network shows published by DC Comics. Also once again The later issues of Cartoon Network Action Pack featured Ultimate Alien comic stories.

Also their were at least three Aborted Arcs in Ultimate Alien were salvaged as much as possible for Omniverse: Zs'Skayr goes into Dr. Viktor's body and consumes King Xarion's soul, freeing Dr. Viktor's mind. A graphic novel was supposed to show what happened to Elena Validus and the Hive nanochips. This didn't succeed as intended, as the novel not only explained nothing about this when it actually came out, but actually raised even more questions.

Charmcaster's Omniverse arc still follows up from the aborted one she had back in Ultimate Alien, albeit with Broad Strokes being applied to it rather than it just being ignored entirely.
Thunder Dragon chapter 6 . 12/9/2022
Can I make one more suggestion for the story?

It is for some of Ben and Kirby's space bound adventures. Seeing as Sugilte brings back the Petrosapians maybe you can create another new adventure where Ben and Kirby use the Omnitrix to bring back Canonbolt's species and gather the survivors home to their restored home world as Arburian Pelarotas are believed to be extinct from the universe, but it wouldn't surprise Eugene Son one of the shows creators if there are a few alive somewhere.

This is confirmed by another of the shows creators as Derrick J. Wyatt believed that there are supposedly a few survivors scattered across the galaxy.

If you want to make this story awesome you are going to need to expand the story and maybe try to apply some of the ideas of the show that never got produced.

Like for example the Charms of Bezel. Originally, the Charms of Bezel were not magic, instead, they were advanced Bezelian technology that seemed magic to Earth. This was retconned in Omniverse, as Bezel was revealed to be a person.

It is unknown how the Charms of Bezel were restored or remade by the time of Omniverse. So why not make your own spin on how that happens. That would be cool! And maybe you can take some ideas from the reboot as well.

I would love to see you tackle parts of the classic Ben 10 shows that were never covered. Such as once again the Dragons. Yes, I am still hoping you do that.

Please check the Ben 10 Wiki and their is something you can use involving Dragons as an example. For example There are also Mythical Dragons in Ben 10 Classic Continuity living on Earth along with Alien Dragons. Oh and the Mythical Dragons are in the Ben 10 2016 Reboot now as well.

Once again here is what I could find.

A sect of Forever Knights would stop at nothing to destroy dragons. Dwayne McDuffie in Alien Force once claimed more of this species would be seen in future episodes, but this did not happen and there were no plans to revisit this species in Omniverse because no one wanted to revisit that arc.

Here are sources from that web-sight. It is called Ben 10 Planet.
Crew Statements
Derrick J. Wyatt
File:Dragon Aliens Different From Mythical Dragons.
File:Mythical Dragons Exist.
File:Dragons Excluded in OV.

Speaking of which when you touch on the Forever Knights episode that brought up Alien Dragons maybe Ben gains access to that form and Dragon ends up getting an Ultimate Form and becomes sentient like with some of the Ultimate Aliens. Then maybe that dragon(His name is up to you)ends up looking out for Dragon Eggs and asks Ben and also Azmuth to keep them safe and the Dragon also ends up finding the more mystical dragons on Earth that never appeared in the classic series but you can take inspiration from the Ben 10 2016 Reboot, the Kirby series, Fairy Tail and also all the ancient legends of dragons from across the world to be unique.,

And maybe on Ben and his Dragon's journey across the cosmos they also manages to convince the mythical dragons of Ben's Earth to migrate to Legerdomain or work to find the Alien Dragon's home world to help find a new home their as they are being hunted by the Forever Knights. That could also apply to the other mystical species on Ben 10's Earth who now with Earth being invaded every other week do not feel safe their anymore and some move to Legerdomain.

The reason why I hope you do this is because Ben 10 is one of my favorite cartoons ever and I want this story to shine. And to do that you need to put in the elbow grease and make something original. Now I hope that I am not offending you and I also hope you keep writing this story cause you do an excellent job with it and I cannot wait for more to come out.

I mean it. You are really doing an exemplary job on merging the Kirby Anime and the Ben 10 Alien Force series I love it! It is awesome! Now seeing as you are such a good writer I will be sending you a challenge after this review.

But for now I must once again Review! Someone call Iron Chef, Because that Snake was served! Kirby would be an awesome guest in Cooking Shows and a competitor in cooking contest. Good job on making Ben and Julie dig more into being responsible parents.

And I also liked how Ben was a good boyfriend when they were talking about going out to eat. I loved that small moment right there.

Now once again I hope we see you tackle some original arcs but it is done in away similar to the Ben 10 Classic Series.

For Kirby I still hope you adapt some more of the Kirby games but in the style of the Kirby Anime.

Also I love the fact that Kirby is fitting in so well with his adoptive parents and how he is such a an adorable little bundle of cut, energy, and power, and Meta Knight is as awesome as he was in the show.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/1/2022
Any story where Kirby gets adopted is cute. Keep up the good work!
Ultimatrix bearer chapter 6 . 11/28/2022
I love cooking powers.

KEEP BEING AWESOME!

PS- once you get to ultimate alien is Julie going to get her own super mode to match the ultimates?
Ultimatrix bearer chapter 5 . 11/28/2022
I like where this is going. Though I'm curious as to whether they're being influenced like the game implied.

KEEP BEING AWESOME!
Thunder Dragon chapter 6 . 11/21/2022
I have to resend one of my reviews as I have a few suggestions for later story arcs.

Someone call Iron Chef, Because that Snake was served! Kirby would be an awesome guest in Cooking Shows and a competitor in cooking contest. Good job on making Ben and Julie dig more into being responsible parents. I loved that small moment right there.

Now I hope we see you tackle some original arcs. For Kirby I hope you adapt some of the games but in the style of the Kirby Anime.

For the Ben 10 Alien Force side of the crossover. I would love to see you tackle parts of the show that were never covered. Such as the Dragons. Check the Ben 10 Wiki and their is something you can use involving Dragons as an example. For There are also Mythical Dragons in Ben 10 Classic Continuity living on Earth along with Alien Dragons.

Here is what I could find from their.

A sect of Forever Knights would stop at nothing to destroy dragons.
Dwayne McDuffie once claimed more of this species would be seen in future episodes, but this did not happen. and There were no plans to revisit this species in Omniverse because no one wanted to revisit that arc.

Here are sources from that websight.
Crew Statements
Derrick J. Wyatt
File:Dragon Aliens Different From Mythical Dragons.
File:Mythical Dragons Exist.
File:Dragons Excluded in OV.

Also maybe we can see Kirby fight the Dagon. It would not be Kirby unless we see him punch out a primordial horror.

If you are going to bring in more Star Warriors from the Anime then here is a list of Star Warriors from the show that we know about.

Meta Knight
Knuckle Joe's Father (Deceased - KIA by Meta Knight)
Kit Cosmos (alive, went MIA on an island on Popstar)
Garlude (Deceased - KIA by Kirisakin)
Sir Arthur
Sir Galahad
Sir Percival
Sir Lancelot
Thunder Dragon chapter 6 . 11/9/2022
That is fair, I would however be grateful if you put my request on some forums for someone to take up to be fair.
omnimegalander chapter 1 . 11/7/2022
Thunder Dragon, let me preface this by first saying how much I appreciate your reviews. It's been quite a while that I feel like I've had real honest-to-god feedback. I'm also honored and flattered that you hold so much faith in me that you believe me to be capable of handling such a massive challenge.

However, I apologize for this, but I must decline your challenge. Don't get me wrong, it's not because I dislike any of the series in there: I'm fond of the original Dragon Ball, and I have played Street Fighter before. However, I am not as equipped in Darkstalkers lore, and I honestly worry that if I do end up taking your challenge, I'll end up doing a disservice to all involved franchises. I have no idea how to play with all the ideas you have, and I worry that I'll just botch it up with my limited knowledge.

Again, I apologize if this disappoints you, but I don't think I'm quite ready for such a gargantuan project, one where my knowledge is rather lacking and would be detrimental as a whole. However, I do sincerely thank you for having so much faith in me as an author, and that I'm flattered you think so highly of my work.
Thunder Dragon chapter 6 . 11/7/2022
Someone call Iron Chef, Because Kirby would be an awesome guest in Cooking Shows and a competitor in cooking contest.

Good job on making Ben and Julie dig more into being responsible parents. I loved that small moment right their.
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