Okay I know the harem is the authors plan but dear god things are speeding up too quickly. Would've liked a more fleshed and heartfelt relationship build up prior to this. Some fics do the harem route really well with relationship building but this one feels like good starts with female characters but then jumping the gun almost immediately. The game system is probably helping things along quicker but I like some emotion with my lemons not just soulless spicy times.

Again with the roughness. I hope the author mellows out on the aggressive lemons soon.

Ngl i don't like that the mc is being treated like a puppet.

They actually did do more with team cvfy in some side books from what i know

New power idea, what if you give Reid the Leviathan Eikon from ff XVI (or a fire eikon)? In my opninion it suits him and will help his goal of killing the dumbasses that are the brother gods

Damn. would've liked if they teamed up.

it so close to spelling MSG

Well… at least (Half-)Elf Waifu got.

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it was a nice plan

it's the big bad herself

Aww, truly I was hoping for him to join her, it would have been an interesting twist but damn that last scene with her coming back made up for it

Yeah. This one was an L. Like i hated this chapter. Unfollow

:/