Reviews for A Blade Forged In The Ashes
Lazy Servant chapter 42 . 9/11/2021
Thanks for the chapters.
SonofOdin112 chapter 42 . 9/10/2021
Huh, so Ren has the MEoDP in addition to having Eresh as a Servant. Things are heating up.
And it seems that Octavia is still active inside Kyoko despite Momo's wish... how curious.
Freeseti chapter 42 . 9/10/2021
Really nice chapter. Loved the discussion between characters, especially between Archer and Yuma. If I had to give critique it would be the mystic eyes killers. I do not think Archer would be skilled enough as a magus to create a pair. If I recall correctly, Aoko stole a pair to give to Tohno from her sister, who is a mage known for her skills.

I think it would be more interesting if Ren had to tough it out, but that would be a bit cruel. I think making her mystic eyes work like Ryougi's and being able to switch it on/off would be a better choice.
Guest chapter 42 . 9/10/2021
Damn too short! I need Kitsu meeting the Emiya soon. Oh and will Yuma ever summon a servant? Imagine if Yuma summon Kama lmao
Guest chapter 42 . 9/10/2021
ZeaDragon chapter 42 . 9/10/2021
"You know most girls wouldn't be very excited about being gifted dangerous medieval weaponry."

Speak for yourself, Archer!
TimeDiver chapter 42 . 9/10/2021
...why the frell does Robin Hood keep around a (spare?) set of Mystic Eye Killer(s)?!

I mean, if it were Medusa, I could buy that justification... but Robin-turned-Tomohisa?
narwastu13 chapter 41 . 9/8/2021
The fundamental bearing Emiya name is to be broken and full of suffering. It's family tradition no matter if you're adopted or not lol
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 41 . 9/6/2021
…I have sooooo many feels here.
keybladelight chapter 41 . 9/4/2021
Can you make Yuma summon a servant in her side to help her and also madoka since she his a demi-servant, archer and Ereshkigal (rin) are now there it will be interesting if you make Yuma summon artoria and madoka summon shirou but into the pseudo servant sengo muramasa that shirou could be the one of the VN route that still love her saber and it will be cool to see them back and see the whole FSN VN route gang back together to help madoka world.
sawtooth44 chapter 41 . 9/3/2021
3 times now insanity has showed up
Rin: the Emiya's are really made up of crazys arnt they
TimeDiver chapter 41 . 9/3/2021
Everybody be focusing on the Emiya (extended) family drama, yet... Ren is developing something very freaking close to the Mystic Eyes of Death Perception. Yep, THOSE things.

Even with Eresh as a Servant, this is really SUS; whether she ends up Nanaya or Ryougi-tier, who could say? Other than the author, who has no motive to un-spoiler that info?
TheHolyBlade chapter 41 . 9/3/2021
Oh Yuma... Thank you very much for the chapter, and I hope she'll get a hug next chapter.
DBoblivion chapter 41 . 9/3/2021
Emiyas inferno was made up of all of humanity's evil l, leaving him hollow, after seeing kiritsugus smile he deduced that saving people happiness and nothing else, his morals are derived from his ideals as "saving people happy then harming peoplebad"
I feel that she isn't quite as broken as emiya or maybe my interpretation of emiya as a kid is wrong,
keybladelight chapter 40 . 9/1/2021
Het will Kyoko will learn archer real name emiya shirou but the one of UBW route the one that he fell in over with Rin I just like that emiya UBW and shirou VN (the one that fell in love to artoria since their pathbare different) see the two timeline of fate stay night of both archer and shirou in her dream and she see shirou VN route that he walk to avalon to find her lover artoria and to see Kyoko get a funny shock reaction that king Arthur was a girl all along.

Hope to see Robin hooded teach madoka about nobles phantasm and her reality marble since you have make her a demi servant.

Hope that you make ekeshiriel and archer get a little romance moment even a little so that rin can help archer (shirou) EMIYA heart and to have rin take the goddess body temporary to have some little romance with them.
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