Reviews for A Blade Forged In The Ashes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I hope the Servants meet soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Those death flags keep getting higher and higher. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the chapter. I oook forwards to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty ominous... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Got the message. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey what's with the underline? |
![]() ![]() The characterization of Archer is really solid in this story, well done! Really loving what you've created so far. Keep it up. |
![]() ![]() Since Momo is still alive she will be an important character in Kamihama on future chapter. Wherever there's reunion the author will decide when she will make her appearance. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What you've made so far is amazing! I'm not all that good with expressing myself, but I have to say that I really love how you've blended all the nasuverse aspects and the character development of Kyoko, and her magecraft. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Only problem with this awesome chapter is that Charlotte cannot create any cheese. While she can create any snacks and desserts, her favorite/obsessed food: cheese, cannot be created. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story, so far! I only have read through Fate stay/night, so getting to learn about Kyoko through your interpretation of the events was fun. I've passed by your story before because I wasn't familiar with, nor was I interested in, magical girl-esque fiction, but it seems I unfairly judged the fic. For the story, you illustrated Archer perfectly and I love the growth Archer encourages in Kyoko, Mami, etc. I don't know how Kyoko would have acted in the initial fiction, but Kyoko's growth has her as a delightfully fantastic character, and her interactions with the magical girls are great. It was a bit confusing jumping to a new cast of characters in the recent chapters, but I imagine that my only knowing one half of the crossover would be behind that. Good work overall, and I look forward to the next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() We in Magia record land now. Time for archer to beat up the millions of the Wings of the Magius soon |
![]() ![]() Um... This will be a spoiler for next chapter. That old man is not a youkai but part of rumor made by some group or cult wherever it is. |
![]() ![]() Thanks for the chapter |
![]() ![]() Oh shit. What the hell just happened. 24... what does it mean.. |