Reviews for A Blade Forged In The Ashes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is good but have a lot of plot holes… Like the oracle/precognition thingy, if Emiya project Excalibur, Rhongomyniad or Avalon he will be cut out of the fate line(even the root wont know what he will do next and that’s why Manaka was obsessed with Arthur). The most notable plot hole is the contract of the magical girls, he can nullify that with Rule Breaker(is only low ranked for the only function that is breaking contracts), Medea used this to break free from the curse of the Goddess of love, and its stated that the dagger is a divine construct itself, and it was even used to break the contract between Sakura and Angra. The only downside in this part is the lost of the benefits if the bind of the contract is also a Noble Phantasm that it will be destroyed. Now for the Puella Magica side I have not much to say, everything in that series is bullsh*t in itself lol Anyway I will keep waiting patiently for the update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the chapter ,please come back soon with more chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() kek Yuma learning freindship is fun to read. Hahaha UBW abridged refrence, "bad cop vs worse cop". |
![]() ![]() ![]() Magical girls can be immortal as long as they have enough grief seed/cube. For example is Pernelle that still living even after Tart era. Just consider giref seed/cube as a food just like normal human and think as pragmatic as possible. |
![]() ![]() ![]() When will chaldea appear in the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Always happy to see more Nagisa! I like how shes becoming part of the group. Rest of the chapter was good too! Cant wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank you for this latest chapter Loyally awaiting the next Brother Sergeant Bov. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this chapter please come back soon with more chapters I love this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ch29. I'm not getting this ark. Like at all. What the hell is happening here? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can see how puberty is hitting Yuma pretty hard, what an attitude, although it's refreshing in a way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, i am quit for this fic, the fic is a shit |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! Im so haply Nagisa is appearing again! Shes my favorite girl in the show and i cant wait to see her (hopefully) become more invved in whats going on! She was sent here by Godoka after all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() GAAAHHH THIS IS STILL SOOO GOOOODDDDDDD. plz more |
![]() ![]() ... I'll get a gravestone commissioned. Who's getting the shovel? XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Continue, pls! |