Reviews for Bhaalson Remodel |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story. it's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter. |
![]() ![]() Just saw this fic's profile pic and i have to say its a good one |
![]() ![]() ![]() Isn't Jaheria a druid? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Never split the party in the face of the enemy perhaps - Chapter 10 end notes? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Don't worry about not adding lemons. A gratuitous lemon only detracts from the fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why could they not resurrect Gorien, but could the bard and wizard. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Imoen did not seem to have much interaction with Harry. Then he said she was his best friend. Besides that the fic seems to flow well. Balder's Gate is a realm I do not know much about, but the Potter characters allow me to identify with them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() With Balders gate 3 being out he needs to come back to this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm. I'm kinda surprised Imoen/Tonks didn't use something close to Dispel Magic, Finite Incantatem, on the Silence spell. Does it not exist in Baldur's Gate. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Coming back to this after BG3 is fun, need to start over to rember how things went though |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy shit this is forced trash. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your fight scenes, neither too long and boring nor too complicated to make sense of. Normally I skip through most combat but reading your is actually exciting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'll be honest, I skipped over the entire god sections, and not just because of the allcap horror. It just didn't do anything good for the story, especially when it was just to have a 'debate' about racism whose conclusion was obvious from the start. It's not like you were going to kill Harry or otherwise end the story. The tension subverted itself through its own impotence, and through that crippled the chapter, unfortunately. Half a dozen gods in a shouting match also overdid it, regardless of anything else. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great starting chapter (though writing out all the classes when he was only going to pick 1 seemed off, could have just given a summary of the others). The characterizations and the way you tell the story very enjoyable. And the way you bring Tonks through the story and into the game was very nicely done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please tell me you’re not done with this master piece yet. I’m in absolute aw and I’m love with your story. |