Just finished it, and I’m loving it! Can’t wait for the next one!

Thank you for a chapter so early. I really like the part with the bet and also the part when they talk about Percy at the beginning.

Fantastic!

I need more. This story has quickly become one of my all time favorites and I’m terrified of the day it gets abandoned or is no longer consistently updated

Oh no! Athena’s pet owl

Really enjoyed the dialogue between Iroh and team avatar. Always fun to see Percy and Azula bonding. Not much action this chapter but the dialogue was good so it works.

Forget the fight scene the new scene at the beginning was great. Sparring, flirting, and joking around sounds just like Percy. I like the trust dialogue between Percy and Azula I thought the difference between the two is really shown there

Yay I can’t wait for the next chapter! I really wanna say Percy come back during the fight in ba sing sae and just create a kick ass storm! Probably what you have planned lol. But this was another great chapter and I can’t wait for more!

Surprised the owl called him and even knew about him.
Dissappinted they keep saying Percy is water tribe.
Also surprised that hermes has shown up

I have to say I really enjoy Percy’s humor in this chapter. The way he goes back and forth with Bumi and Sokka is just fun. I understand y he lost against Bumi and support that decision Bumi gets slept on too much

Last I checked you didn’t have a family. Damnnnnn that’s a low blow I love it. It was nice to see them talk openly though I wonder how much Percy ends up changing her beliefs

That Ozai dialogue scene is definitely an improvement I really like that. I think you might have made a mess up with Percy should be turning 17 in this chp instead of 16. The water tribe was not ready for Percy in that battle. And that ending scene with Percy humiliating Raijin? Niceeee

I like Gladiator with Russel Crowe too so it’s a nice callback. I’m okay with Percy being to bloodbend without the full moon because he’s different than anyone we’ve seen. And if Korra is gonna do that you have free reign. Honestly if this story goes we’ll continue it onto Korra somehow. Percy can fix so many things wrong with that.

This story is chugging along, I’m really enjoying it. You’re getting to the point now where Percy and the princess ended, so I’m excited to see where you take it from there. Your writing has been implemented very smoothly, so I think you’ll be able to dish out some crazy good plot. Keep up the great work.

I really like it. Percy being on the side of the fire nation is fairly unique. Loyalty and a bit of denseness being Percy's weak points feels true to form. Though this chapter you said Percy didn't know about Poseidon controlling storms or earthquakes when Poseidon literally told Percy that he was god of storms and earthquakes as well and not to forget it.