Nice insight into Dumbledore's thoughts. He makes mistakes but I never buy into him being straight up evil.

I have to second Jack Prime Darby's review of this chapter. It's nice, refreshing and a bit sad to see that you didn't go with Dumbledore as some terrible evil mastermind, but just an old man with way too much work and good intentions that, unfortunately, have (somewhat) misfired.

I particularly like the bit where he's very obviously impressed with how Lily's protections on Harry (Violet) _incinerated_ Quirrel, and why he thinks this is clear proof that no matter how unpleasant Petunia's treatment is, clearly, keeping Violet's living conditions as they currently are is the best possible option compared to losing the Voldermort-murdering shield of love.

It makes the way everyone else in the story is badmouthing him a bit sad, given how clearly he's on Violet's side, and in fact, quite happy she's (seemingly) doing so well at home. The fact he's using the scandal trashing his reputation to have more (no doubt positive) legislation snuck into the courts is just bonus goodness.

Karkaroff you keep writing krakof

oh damn I was really hoping the system wouldn't have a party feature. Seems to be the death of almost every gamer story I've ever read. Especially when the MC starts focusing on levelling up others rather than himself.

This was a great holiday gift! Your Dumbledore seems *gasp* HUMAN? Lol I like that he isn't some cartoon villain or super goody hero

Just wanted to point that you misspelled Grindelwald as Grindewald

You also still very often mix up than vs than, overusing then a lot. I think literally more than half the usages of 'then' in this chapter should have been 'than' instead

/words-at-play/when-to-use-then-and-than

Examples where it should instead be than, since it's a comparative, and they don't need to be next to each other, if both words are in a sentence, then it should likely be than:
longer then
rather then
more then
other then

Please get a proofreader, the mistake seems to be deeply ingrained. Or you will need to check every single 'then' in a chapter before uploading to get it right... though I don't think that would help much since it doesn't seem like your internal spellchecker works at all in this area.

Great job on this interesting chapter!

For the greater good is why Lawful Neutral people are fucking scary.

And happy new year :)

Ey a new year chapter update awesome

Really wish my guy makes flying shoes, flying long board or maybe even a cloak of levitation like doctor strange hahahaha (snape it your heart out! My cloaks cooler!)

Sitting on a broom doesnt really look all that cool

Oooh maybe enchant a harley?(maybe make the wheels be on fire for light and badassery? Or a yamaha supersports motorcycle?(for aerodynamics) Oooooh maybe a matte black 74-Z Speeder bike?! That would look awesomeand aerodynamic and if you add an air shield on the front it would break the wind and act as a shield for wind and maybe spellfire

The form you showed Albus is my favorite form and the one that I feel is the Albus from the books, not the most evil in the world as they like to put it in many Fics but rather a man with too many responsibilities on his shoulders who unfortunately For him people keep putting more and more burdens on his shoulders, and not so arrogant that he believes that only he can do the things that have to be done, I would say that he might seem a bit arrogant in how he thought they couldn't do the job but I present pretty good points on that and if I don't see Amos Diggory doing as well as Albus in wartime mostly from lack of experience, now I feel bad for the old Headmaster, it's refreshing to see an Albus like that, usually or is it Absolutely Evil or is he Good but absolutely incompetent and he thinks he has all the answers, in this case in the decisions he seems more like someone who has to find the best cards from a bad hand, and he is so good In fact, I cannot say that he made a bad choice, he simply chose the best one he could with the information he has since while it is true that life with the Dursleys is not good and I would not wish it on anyone, those protections saved her life to Violet
I think it's pretty hilarious that all their plans went so wrong, well they say that no plan survives contact with the enemy, that's a fun way to see the first book Aka Harry Potter and The Golden Trio Ruining The Dark Lord Trap With Existing , I just hope that Wonder Girl (because of you I can't call her otherwise) is as understanding towards Albus as I am being although I doubt it I just hope that Albsi has time to explain himself before the most dangerous curses come out of the Wand by WonderGirl

This is definitely well written but duuuuuuuuude you write so much bullshit... I skipped A LOT OF TEXT WALLS on every chapter and still didn't miss anything important of the story.
The only reason I keep reading this magnificent tale is because the MC, Female Tomboy Harry and Lily. You wrote them awesome and I mea and I want to see where all of this is going. But I would definitely enjoy it more with less... malarkey.

Loved it!
I'm also not adverse to adding a few more girls...mainly daphne greengrass and fleur...just saying. He could have a way to touch up on his French.
Looking forward to more!

... gold... gem... precious... ha!... divine!. ohhh, amazing writing at every turn. Has me needing to catch my breath most of the time with the laughter too!

Enjoyable rich in detail as usual.

It is my opinion that your writing style is quite slow (if this were being done professionally I'd perhaps suggest an editor) I do think it's going to take hundreds of thousands of words for some of these plot threads to pay off.

Still you write it well so it was still a good chapter all in all. I particularly liked Nick's thoughts around his rune matrix.

I look forward to the next one.