Oh, I like this chapter. It's nice!

The chapter ending was hilarious! XD

Okay, this is seriously awesome. Truly, very cool!

I had once before read a fanfic with something similar happening, but this one is so much cooler

Had to come back and give this Great story another read. Even If you never see this Hawk, I hope that everything's alright on your end and hope you return at some point. I'll just return to lurking, hoping one day to see this story continue.

jajaajaja really good! TFTC! Hope you come back...

I still come back from time to time to check on your stories to see if you've written anymore. It's a bit sad that you haven't updated... but thanks for the content you've added and if you happen to write more in the future, I don't think I'm alone when I say I'll be there to read those as well. Hope everything is well on your side and thanks again.

I worship the author for such a cool story and look forward to a new chapter (I hope that it will be after all)

Wake up old man the story is incredible and needs updating when you have the time

Thanks for an interesting chapter

bro shes a child dont call her shawty

i came back to re-read this after almost two years of missing it! still one of my favorite guilty pleasures, heh. hope you're doing well man.

I love this story so far! It’s so engaging and it’s just an overall well written story. I love it so much!

any news for an update?

worthless pussy beta bitch trash fic

Your story is well written and if you chose to migrate to Questionable Questing it would be well received.

I sincerely hope that you aren’t dead. It has been 610 days since your last update, same for your profile page.