Your story is well written and if you chose to migrate to Questionable Questing it would be well received.

I sincerely hope that you aren’t dead. It has been 610 days since your last update, same for your profile page.

Is anyone planning, with the author's permission, to make a continuation of this story, or a similar story with the concept of this system and protagonist?

What a sensational story, I think it's my favorite, although the general development of things takes a long time.
In terms of dialogue and Nick's initial development as a player, it's quite good, although there are a lot of things that confuse me in relation to the broken demon system.
Something was put in place to see how serious the system was but it didn't work for me, does anyone know how to make that link work?

I wouldnt be suprised if homunculus james being revived with violets blood somehow made him a woman, then nick could suduce three female potters. Go above and beyond his subquest

multiple instances where then should be than.

St Mungo s - St Mungo's

Numengard - Nurmengard

zerg the bastard?
How would either he or they know what that word means?
It's the kind of thing that really strains SoD, I would recommend rewording that line.

You keep getting legilimency and its offshoots wrong:
wiki/Legilimency

Legimancy - Legilimency

Legimens - Legilimens

Legimancer - Legilimens

Legimancers - Legilimens

(the word is the same in singular and plural forms... like sheep)

more then - more than (then-than error pops up in every chapter, please learn the difference and fix it, or get an editor to help out)

You often write then when it should be than

Broken formatting, there are several words with _ _ around them

It has always been a big disappointment that this story was never continued.
Thank you for the amount that you did write though.

As a Danish guy, I would honestly not call this grooming. Half the girls in my high school class were dating men in their mid to late twenties, so I can't really say it bothers me. I wouldn't do it myself, but I also won't condemn it.

Please update. Please update. Please update. Please update. Please update. Please update. Please update. Lucky number 7. :-)

love this, amazing story so far.

Wow really interesting, the fact that Lily is still in war survival mode while recovering certainly mixes things up for her. Now im really hoping youll come back to this story. Its got some very unique plot lines and your skill at description is well done! Hope youll return, in the meantime thanks for the great read!