I was liking it till the whole sex slave shit popped up. and now I'm dropping it

Please update

“Violet was also a bit out of his strike zone due to her young age, but it kinda felt like this was a bit of a long-term project and she'd likely just grow into quite the legendary beauty in a few years. She was already an admittedly extremely pretty young girl, another two or three years and she'd beat out 10/10 girls on their best day without even having to try. So yeah, kind of iffy, but it wasn't like she would stay young forever”

So fucking a 15-year-old is gross, but grooming her is fine? Fucking gross.

Did the author abandon the site? Aw

Woulda liked a goodbye authors note

I always visit this profile to see if there’s an update

More please

It's been a year, I still miss this story, its rare we get slow but interesting stories that remind me of the writing style of the dungeon defense light novels because of how well its written.
Hope you are doing well Hawk and that Sweeden didn't get hit as badly by the whole Russian fuel problem this winter.

dear Mr guest if you don't have anything productive to say, don't bother reading!

Disgusting! keep Harry male! If you want to make him a girl then make him gay and the fic a slash story because that would had been better! The whole fem Harry is stupid and dumb concept.

Need more. Especially more Tonks.

Will there be more updates?

Really good story. I love the way that your building this up. I’m really looking forward to see what else you can do with this.

Please finish the history is amazing, cheers.

'Familiar system'
Ok, i want him with a familiar, like Violet and Hedwig D:

this is one of my favorite gamer story I hope it continues.

is this the "tell me you're a Male author writing a female character without telling me you're a male authorchallenge? well you won