is this the "tell me you're a Male author writing a female character without telling me you're a male authorchallenge? well you won

if you want a gamer fiction with lots of plat ninja gamer is a good one

hope you haven’t been assasinated like all the other ffn writers that disappear halfway through their stories.

Can we please see some actual fucking magic and interaction with the magical world? please?.

200 000 words in, that's 2 whole ass books worth of words, and they haven't even fucked yet, amongst other things.

The gamer system a demon? Weakened demon?. You gonna use this to give one of antagonists a bs power up aren't you...

Welp seeing how long this has taken to get here I doubt this will ever get anywhere anytime soonbefore it gets dropped or end abruptly.

Pity, your dialogue and character interaction, most of the time, are really well done.

Thanks for sharing and gl

I agree with you Guest down here. The whole plot of the story is just echii with plot along side the authors own fetishes just like any other half of the stuff written here in this site , True most of the stuff are just narrated by the MC trying to justify his shit. But the negative reviewers forgot we literally have villain MCs doing most of the crap that are questionable and criminalic irl. Calling this fanfic "pedophilic" while we got other written Fiction that are also fucked up from this site and books that are sold on the bookstore , but why aren't we calling those out authors and readers them out as violent rapist? Future Serial killers? Or Felonies? Considering those have weird crap like this?.

Isn't that ironic for the some author reviewers here when they also have dabbled other weird tropes genocide , mind control , harem and so on. Safe to say you guys are also fucked up people?

Damn most bloody "guest" reviewers are bunch of morons aren't they? Gets obsessed over this fictional "age gap" risky scenes but most likely don't care when Fictional characters get raped , murdered, tortured, genocide , or weird fetishes have been written in this site etc that are also crime in irl and accept them as just fiction only with other gamer or Harry Potter fanfics.

Do your self a favor guess reviewer don't be a schizo

Fascinating explanations of the Blood Protection and, especially, the System. I don't think I have ever read anything remotely similar about them either. Well done!

been half a year since the last chapter, wonder if he died.

phones didn't get screens capable of even watching porn until 2007

I kept reading Nick Jonas

When canon will star? Have been specting shit hit the fan in the cup finals

this is wildLoving it! Completely different and unique!

The bonk in the head had me laughin for a while XD

Honestly enjoy this story a bunch. the writing between and interaction between characters are excellent, and feels fairly realistic. and compared to the usual gamer/isekai/regressor tropes hitting on a 16 year old is basically vanilla... for better or worse.

however there is still some flaws? the biggest one being repeats of information/extended monologuing. this story is like 99% people talking to each other or the mc thinking about something. there is a lack of doing? if that makes any sense. having breaks where our mc goes out and do stuff, create stuff or actively gathering information. this is somewhat compounded by the lack of scale? someone wrote it before its 200k words but the story so far is about a week timeline wise.

regardless i think the story is great, and i hope the author didnt kick the bucket due to covid or something else

Just read the lot from woah to go, really enjoyed it! Nick is a great protagonist and I love your variant on the Gamer system. I think this is the first fic I've come across with one needing to be repaired, and starting with Nick as-is at the start of the fic was a great way to skip the fumbling first steps that can make Gamer fics feel a bit samey. All in all, a wonderful story that I can't wait to read more of, and I love your work!