I kept reading Nick Jonas

When canon will star? Have been specting shit hit the fan in the cup finals

this is wildLoving it! Completely different and unique!

The bonk in the head had me laughin for a while XD

Honestly enjoy this story a bunch. the writing between and interaction between characters are excellent, and feels fairly realistic. and compared to the usual gamer/isekai/regressor tropes hitting on a 16 year old is basically vanilla... for better or worse.

however there is still some flaws? the biggest one being repeats of information/extended monologuing. this story is like 99% people talking to each other or the mc thinking about something. there is a lack of doing? if that makes any sense. having breaks where our mc goes out and do stuff, create stuff or actively gathering information. this is somewhat compounded by the lack of scale? someone wrote it before its 200k words but the story so far is about a week timeline wise.

regardless i think the story is great, and i hope the author didnt kick the bucket due to covid or something else

Just read the lot from woah to go, really enjoyed it! Nick is a great protagonist and I love your variant on the Gamer system. I think this is the first fic I've come across with one needing to be repaired, and starting with Nick as-is at the start of the fic was a great way to skip the fumbling first steps that can make Gamer fics feel a bit samey. All in all, a wonderful story that I can't wait to read more of, and I love your work!

The MC is really infuriatingly insufferable, a complete pillock. Paraphrasing one Random Guest, either the author is a incompetent moron who somehow accidentally managed to write such compelling garbage, or he is a competent troll who did it on purpose. I dont know which one is actually worse. Apparently the story is dead, so it is a moot point anyway.

Warning to new readers: This is not a normal Gamer Fic, and you should not waste your time reading it, the Main character is basically and Moronic Emo Edgelord who thinks he is a mature adult while being hipocritical, a false moralizer, grooming and mind controlling underaged minors, and whats worse, He has the Gamer Systems but not only he is not grinding, hes letting the poor Game System die of slow starvation. What an asshole.

All the story up until now takes place in more or less 5 days. Almost 2 years, 225k words and only 5 days in story time. I really doubt that this story will have a end.

The thing I like about this is that even among Gamer fics it's very unique. It's plot points aren't ones that are used often (if at all) and I am enjoying the direction it's going. I really hope it doesn't get abandoned like most gamer fics.

Oh please post a new chapter soon. I love this story. You've done a brilliant job. Thank you for putting it out here for us to enjoy.

This Self Insert Story is Infuriating. The author either is a complete incompetent that managed to write such annoying garbage, or he is a actually competent writer that did it on purpose.

LOL...too soon...but I'm here for it.

Poor Nick.

I love Nick. He's like...Yeah, I'm a sick bastard but I'm in it for the long haul. Coming of age for the win.

Well that got dark fast