Hope that you find time to update

excited to see where this goes! keep up the good work.

I don't really know why this story has that many favs, sure it has decent writing and grammar and good enough starting plot and semi-interesting OC/SI character. But all in all its a complete lacklustre story, chunks of dialogues, makes it hard to decipher and read the repetitive monologuing just keeps going until I just skip several chapters and lo and behold nothing has happened. I can even ignore the borderline pedophilia because Violet is almost sixteen but the disturbing almost casual overtone of sex slavery and dominance to fulfil said quest is off-putting at best and makes the OC character insidious and unlikable. All in all the story just falls flat the plot is going nowhere and the supposed Gaming mechanic is absent just lots of filler text with no real aim or purpose, to bad It could have been a decent story.

Hey! Albus! De Nile ain't just a river in Africa!

at this point having to resort to skipping every 5 paragraphs to avoid Nick just repeating the same shit over and over again

i think you think your readers are morons or something. because why else do you spend so much time elucidating on obvious shit, repeating stuff (sometimes multiple times in the same chapter), chronicling every stray thought. the ratio of action vs inner monologue/tangents is insane.

you gotta stop talking to readers directly, man. let your characters be characters and don't turn them into Deadpool. Nick spends more time justifying his actions to us as readers than he does actually doing anything. also them going on multi page long mental tangents that lead nowhere ans serve no purpose between pieces of dialogues is so irritating. otherwise a pretty fun read.

Toooooo many huge blocks of straight writing fam, insane levels of exposition, shit was painful to see

This has been a ton of fun so far, I can't wait to see what's coming!

Definitely a fun and interesting story. I'm looking forward to future chapters

Not really a gamer story, at best is a self insert/ oc but what little elements that could partly be called a game system are barely there and not explored, if just call this a self insert with no backstory and be done with it

so MC is plain weak ... despite beeing through hogwarts and extra training he loses to a newly graduated whos plot armor is the sole reason for her survival, not to mention that i have no real idea where the fuck we are in the harry potter plot

so MC is weak in magic... despite beeing through hogwarts and extra training he loses to a newly graduate whos plot armor is the sole reason of survival

lol his given quests are so interesting and yeah her stats, oof they low

thank you for the new chapter. love that you're still writing after over a decade. really amazing! :D