Muchas gracias por la historia

overall, i've enjoyed your story and have read it more than once. however, i think some sentences could be tightened up a bit to avoid repetition (for e.g., a character observing something to themselves and then repeating that observation nearly word for word to the other character), or a bit of over-description of general actions where not every step necessarily needs to be conveyed to the reader. one thing that also stood out to me on this re-read is that bella seems frequently to be described as giggling or talking softly, which personally i'm finding a bit frustrating.

This is my fav Christmas story!

I am crying

I’m back! I love, love this story. Happy Christmas !

I'm just wondering why they haven't traded the rental in for a bigger, safer car, like an SUV. There had to have been the same rental agency in at least one of the towns they've been through. But that's just the practical side of me. The romantic part totally likes them squashed together, often in weather-related (or proximity) danger!

She's being very smart! He needs to be "free" in order for them to really be together. Plus, he's not living his real life right now, and frankly, he's a mess!

Sign: "Out of cars. Please try another company."

Sign: "Out of cars. Please try another company."

Sign: "Out of cars. Please try another company."

Employee: "I'm so sorry, sir, we just rented the last one"

Edward to Bella: "Could you have gotten a smaller car? I'd pay for an upgrade."

ummmm...how are you getting an upgrade to car that isn't there?

I have absolutely loved this fic. It was very clever how both Edward and Bella changed as they challenged each other and allowed space for self- reflection. With everything happening at a very difficult time for both of them, there were some great opportunities for confusion and anxieties. Very well written. Real surprise about Bella’s situation in the middle. Some may have seen it coming but I didn’t. Big thank you.

He’s in a very bad place.

Great start. I’m liking this Bella and that’s not always the case.

I am crying

Imagine wishing your wife good luck to tell your best friend she's pregnant... Yikes. I can't imagine being this stomachless(this is probably not a word)
You are a very good writer though, I'm totally sucked into the plot

Ugh, you just had to mention Jacob! LOL I do love to hate on Jacob, at least you had Bella reject him. Looking forward to reading the sequel. :-)

what is JD?