Reviews for What Are You Doing Here? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Who TALKS that freaking LONG? Smh. Breakdown your dialogues mate, it's a big turn off. Excellent writing otherwise! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i beg keep writing this |
![]() ![]() Well while a well written recap of canon the way it should have been, it's abandonment was not unexpected. |
![]() ![]() I'm sorry but Hermione gave up way to easily for the characterization she has been given. This Hermione would have forced the issue, as well as have researched how to detect love potions. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it |
![]() ![]() If you lost interest in this Work you should have dealt with the Horcruxes immediately. Diary was at the Malfoy's the whole time. Kreature had the Locket. Bellatrix's vault held the cup. The resurrection stone was in the Gaunt Shack. The Diadem was in ROR. Harry has the cursed scar |
![]() ![]() Just how do you justify marking this story " Complete " , You left it dangling with no closure and no continuing second story . very disappointed . |
![]() ![]() All right Roger the Shrubber, I see you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() see its THIS , and stuff like this, that i love reading fanfics for. its so much better than plagiarizing canon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() stop copying cann. stop copying canon. for fucks sake, STOP COPYING CANON. |
![]() ![]() ![]() and hermione just...went along with that retardation with zero hesitation? fuckin WHY? |
![]() ![]() ![]() i dont need them to LEAVE hogwarts or anything, i dont even need the end result of the canon events to change. what i WANT , is for the story to not copy the canon events 100%. im fine with ol' voldy getting revived, but id have preferred it happen differently, maybe let cedric live somehow or have harry put up more of a fight. |
![]() ![]() ![]() annnnd im done. the story is officially shit tier. if you cant do anything besides blindly copy canon you shouldnt write a fanfic. disappointing garbage. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so are we gonna go through the same ol' song and dance of dead cedric, reborn moldyshorts, sadge harry as canon? not to knock on the classics, but i dont see the point of the story copying canon EXACTLY like that, ya know? |
![]() ![]() ![]() so...whats the point of the story now? like theyre a cute couple for sure, but the story is just copying canon with no deviations besides ron still being an asshole (tho i DO like that deviation, fuck ronald) |