I recently read the fanfic "blood bag" and was so disappointed that the author abandoned it right at the moment of the climax of the event. The main character was very well described, almost like a living person who sometimes infuriates, and who sometimes acts logically. the situation is the same here. good fanfic without end. This is very upsetting, you know :'((

I read some of the comments and noticed that some of them are especially illogical and want the main character to be strong like a god since he was 8 years old. I hope that this negativity did not cause you to stop writing new chapters. I really hope that someday you will gather the strength and motivation to finish at least the forest of death arc. It's a pity that great fanfictions with a logical main character very often breaks off in the middle of the story and never continues :((((((((

It would have been better to choose to become a Uzumaki for the denser and larger Chakra level.

Large Chakra Shadow clone training is better than the Hax Sharingan!

this is actually good and i hope it's not abandoned bc you have so many great ideas and a bunch of unfired chekhov's guns

Will you be continuing the story? I read most of it in one setting, and I loved it! :D

:SOB: SASUKEEEE YOU'RE SO SWEET

correction: It's not that obvious YET (regarding A/N at the start of the chapter)

LMAO POOR SHINJI

YOU BETTER KICK THEIR ASSES SHINJI

it is really bad. how in the world he is not better then sasuke even with the gamer system, he relly has to be incompetent.

this is so goood

This whole chapter can be described with “show don’t tell”

This was and is my all time favorite naruto fanfic and too 3 overall in my own history of reading it. The other two are david and goliath by crazyrajat and the progeny of slytherin. And all three havent been updated in years and are more than likely dropped. This is depressing bc all three of these stories are so magnificent. I keep rereading them over and over. I really hope you come back to this some day.

fun read so far
I'd like to throw an idea your way tho
gamer shikamaru
I'm not much for executing ideas sadly

a little disappointed that he going to let sauske get branded.
tho it will add some weird dialogue

I think he is to focused on keeping an already broken timeline. things are already vastly different for main cast

hinata is already much stronger than normal
naruto is more than a two trick pony

85% chance that the snake sanin is already targeting him regardless of his thoughts

also final query what is danzo doing in all this?

Without exaggeration, this is the greatest character in the entirety of fanfiction. Thank you.