Reviews for Tattoos |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful story, really great. My real favorite. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was brilliant! Tha k you for posting it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks |
![]() ![]() Very enjoyable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() As someone's who's wanted to get a tattoo for the longest time and is pretty much as hopeless as Harry here when it comes to women, this might be the greatest Haphne fic ever. Love how you portrayed Daphne, so refreshing |
![]() ![]() Good one |
![]() ![]() ![]() The ending was a bit quick, but it was also really satisfying and the whole story had extremely good pacing otherwise. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, the ending's not bad. I'm just not sure how to improve it. But this is a great little fic and I really enjoyed it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I disagree with your assessment of the "ending lacking" I think it fits quite well and like it. Thanks for the fun read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Luna should be 15 at this point lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet short ff. I really enjoyed it. Cheers! |
![]() ![]() ![]() the end is lacking a bit, but I think that is less due to a lack of info on the Haphne pair and moreso the lack of further follow ups with regard to Harry's "other girls" aka Astoria and Luna. There was great set up for their (admittedly somewhat odd" relationship (non romantic) but no follow through, not even a mention of their places in the wedding party (which I honestly cannot see Luna being excluded, and Astoria is Daphne's sister so would at the least rate a flower girl if not a Bride's maid). Yes the story is ultimately about the Haphne pairing, but both of them are more than just themselves, they are their families' daughter/sister and "brother"/godson. Plus Luna has played a role in their relationship (via Luna-ness as well as drawing the tattoos, speaking of I half expected you to have Luna getting a job at the Ink Pot). But enough of that, the story is great and I enjoyed reading it, thanks for sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really great! I love stumbling across random yet brilliant Haphne one-shots! You nailed the chemistry for sure. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lovely story |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is one of those stories that could have been a longer story. But good nonetheless. |