[tucks hair behind ear] *whispers* hi em...

well well it appears ur huge girthy brain is at it again with the killer au's! first we had taow which is just fascinating but now you are changing the game YET AGAIN with this!

i have seen many things in my time on this stupid website but this is truly so unique and i am so excited to see how the show develops and how kids are selected bc i feel like it is mad fucked! the whole execution thing gives me danganronpa vibes so i hope we see some fuckery of that level... but overall this cast is guaranteed to be so entertaining no matter who is in it considering this concept is suited to insanity

also mahi really did remind me of me when i would live post about the bachelor so i enjoyed that quite a bit, and in addition i liked this glimpse of the show

i cant wait to hear even more about this format bc i know u will be killing the game

i am so glad that dyl and i gave you our angel girls, and i cant wait to see what you do with them if u decide to take them!

okay i am done now

Hi. I might try to submit? I really haven’t been feeling like submitting for a long time, but I might for this story. Also shows my American when I see ON and think “on? what’s on?”
This is such an interesting setup. It’ll also force me to do some Canadian research, which is always cool. I don’t have any comments on the chapter itself, other than that by bringing the violence to the real world, it makes the Games feel so much more… barbaric. It’s harder to dissociate myself from the setting, and oh does it not sit well in my gut.

This is such a fresh and exciting idea... I'm so excited omfg. Your formatting with the story alongside the techno messages really helped kick me into the atmosphere in the story. Really great work :) I will definitely be submitting a character!

You have outdone yourself again with this prologue, your really playing into the whole sphere that Twitter creates. It makes this seem much more realistic especially with the breaks in narrative to show the tweets. I’m so excited to submit and see where you take this story.

Wow, this is super interesting! I've seen other SYOTs set in a modern AU but I was never able to submit to them... so I'm definitely going to submit to this one!

Everyone is making moves.. sigh

The execution of this chapter is very good. I.e the use of a Twitter like system to convey the story. I'm a stickler for things like that.

I immediately have a submission idea for you.

Though why does Canada stoop to this level? Daddy Trudeau, Trudaddy, would NEVER stoop to this level... I expect more exposition soon.

as someone who continually tries and fails to make good Bachelorette tweets, im living for mahira's tweets rn.

also, can I get a hell yeah for modern aus! im so excited for this and for all the angles we're gonna be able to take our tributes. as you well know im #struggling to come up with a kickass girl for ya but i'll get there eventually. just really excited for the possibilities you've allowed us!

I loved the worldbuilding here in terms of social media obsession and especially protestors- and the counterarguments The Cut fans have for enjoying it and acting like it's all moral. i'm intrigued to learn more about what happens to winners and their families especially, though any prologue you write I will definitely eat up.

anywho, hello again darling. ill see you in the next chapter (or probably sooner when I go scream in your dms again). ciao!

LADIES AND GENTLEMEN, AND NON-BINARY PEOPLE OF FANFICTION, IT’S FINALLY HERE, WHAT WE’VE ALL BEEN WAITING FOR: THE FIRST EVER SUBMIT YOUR OWN CANADIAN!

Olive, I’m so proud of you! Ever since I got word of this, I’ve been so incredibly excited to see this concept come to life. And it’s a really good one. The au, reality-show concept has the potential to become something really special. This prologue proved that, big time. First of all, I love how the show has it’s own app? It kinda reminds me of discord, it makes me feel right at home :D Also, criminals are fun!

Expect a sub in the near future. I have something really fun planned, it’ll be a hoot :)

See you soon!