Reviews for Linewalkers
InfinityMask chapter 7 . 3/9/2023
Uhhh Kakashi said he will meet Naruto but we didn’t see it?

Anyway how Hashirama death is mystery. The Hashirama in 4th war is very strong that he killed by someone is very strange. Maybe he still injured from his fight with madara? Or maybe there’s hostages situation?
InfinityMask chapter 6 . 3/9/2023
I really really hope Naruto can save Uchiha clan. At least make more survive. Tho I don’t know how he can do that.
InfinityMask chapter 5 . 3/9/2023
It kinda make sense. Story where he given bad team or sensei is very strange. Haha.
Anyway I kinda think that was Kakashi team. Now I really curious who is who haha.
InfinityMask chapter 4 . 3/9/2023
Why ostrich? Lol. I wonder how long until Hiruzen realize there’s cracks in his and naruto relationship that not there before.
InfinityMask chapter 1 . 3/9/2023
This seems funn.
Mukuro234 chapter 29 . 3/7/2023
awesome chap!
ashishroy.akr08 chapter 29 . 2/23/2023
update soon
miss-direct836 chapter 9 . 2/17/2023
Absolutely hilarious.
Feisty Vixen chapter 7 . 2/7/2023
Pls continue this i really like it
kdkkslap chapter 29 . 2/3/2023
I honestly love this story it is very unique take between all the characters interaction it will also be intriguing to see how he interacts with konoha 11. Looking for more : ) gl
gohan90 chapter 15 . 2/2/2023
Love that Naruto is actually a part of things. Too many stories keep sticking him on the sidelines, even when he graduates early he remains a genin or is left out of important events because he is young. Even though there is people like Itachi taking on dangerous missions and being anbu cap. Great to see him involved in such important events.
gohan90 chapter 5 . 2/2/2023
Glad that Naruto isn't pretending to be an idiot, too many stories where he gets training and is far stronger than canon put chooses to remain deadlast for some silly reason. Love to see him graduate early, no reason for him to stay at the academy if he is ready to be a genin.

I like that you put him with an anbu team, it makes enough sense since there are few options to train him. I do hope you don't go out of your way to nerf him. I see that often in stories where he is impressive early on and then stays at that level so he can never be as impressive as people like Kakashi or Itachi who were jonin and anbu cap by 13.

Very confused about hound, it seems like you were trying to make it seem like it was Kakashi, which makes sense. He isn't part of the anbu team that guards Naruto and is picked to train him, he came in to the office late and did so to watch Naruto even though he wasn't part of the team, plus the name hound and the fact that the third asked his opinion. Really seems like it has to be Kakashi but then Kakashi is surprised and upset by it so it couldn't have been him. Can't think of anyone else it could have been, if not Kakashi who is hound?
VexOzzy chapter 29 . 1/26/2023
Absolute favourite story since it's done so wonderfully, and for the fact that it doesn't have romance
Guest chapter 29 . 1/21/2023
Un buen capítulo
aGnamZer0 chapter 29 . 1/21/2023
Ah, looks like the replacement part shouldn't be in a long time. I'm very eager to see how Naruto will interact with his correspondant and just what changes it will bring to Konoha.

Poor Naruto is in for some boring and harduous lessons in etiquette. I pity him.

I'm a little surprised Tobirama doesn't want Naruto to join ANBU since it would allow Naruto to officially be Owl and Weasel's teammate, but at the same time I completely approve of him keeping Naruto away from this dark place that brands you wouldn't truly ever be able to escape all the horrible deeds you would have done as part of the division.

I remember that Tobirama is more physical and able to interract with the material world since his soul merged or maybe synchronized with Naruto, but I thought it was limited to Naruto. It's been some time though so I'm obviously wrong, but since he can now even interract with objects other than Naruto, does that mean he can actually fight?

Thank you for the chapter.

PS: Also, you said several times to read on AO3, and I've tried reading the last two chapters there after reading them on FFnet, and I prefer by far the latter. So I'll continue to read here.
PPS : As for the omakes on your tumblr, it would be awesome if you could maybe create an omake fanfic of Linewalkes with each chapter as one of your tumblr omakes (to be honest, I've never ever understook Tumblr and I doubt I ever will, though yours is indeed easy to navigate).
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