Reviews for Together
R111 chapter 1 . 12/1/2003
Very nice! But I remind you, a poem doesn't have to rhyme, though your rhyme scheme is good.
Kitsune Fox chapter 1 . 7/12/2003
Well... that was- that was- THAT WAS AWESOME! So Yukina still doesn't know... does she? But that was incredibly sweet all the same.
Trocks chapter 1 . 6/27/2003
i like!
Draith chapter 1 . 6/7/2003
Yes, 'curse you irony gods!' gotta love 'Purple High'... sorry...

'And whisper a name I don't know'... beautifully done! I love that line, it really captures her. There's a lot of angst surrounding Yukina, even if she seems to look so happy on the outside after being rescued. I REALLY love your poetry, and I hope you write many more! I like you freeverse styling, sometimes rhyming, sometimes not... variety is the spice of life they say, or at least, I THINK they say that, I can never be sure, I've never met, 'them'. Who are THEY anyways? The omminous 'they'... sounds like a conspiracy to me, ne? A huge conspiracy... to keep little FF writers and readers like us from discovering the truth about Bob... or someone.