Reviews for Birth of a Legend V2
wowen.ruiz chapter 35 . 7/22/2024
Harem EX is working against the Luck skill again...
Shiroyasha Rises chapter 35 . 7/22/2024
Pandora is one of those obnoxious mothers that coddle their children so much that they become spoiled brats. Which makes it a problem for the progression of Humanity. So it's cool to see Enkidu call her out and Scathach joining in along with Shirou using his presence to shut the Goddess up.
TripleSweet chapter 35 . 7/21/2024
Loving the longer chapters!
egads chapter 34 . 7/21/2024
She chose Shirou didn't she
keybladelight chapter 35 . 7/21/2024
So Metis is fighting shirou's steel can wait for her to lose.

Rin will join man can wait to see more and how master Artoria will fight
kusanagi29 chapter 35 . 7/21/2024
buen capitulo
Bucio chapter 35 . 7/21/2024
To be honest, I imagine this version of Pandora with the appearance of Hestia (DanMachi), who is basically throwing a tantrum and that was the only reason she didn't allow Arturia to wake up (only because she had it easy with Shirou's help; of course easy, if not for that reason, Excalibur - or Caliburn - she would have been destroyed by Ishtar); until between Shirou, Enkidu (who appeared using Shirou as a Medium, quite upset with the Chibi Goddess) and Scathach (doing the same as Enkidu, appearing through Shirou, to support and take an interest in Shirou's potential - perhaps we would see her descend to only spar with him?), they intimidated the "mother" of the Campione, into letting Arturia go, giving the young woman the option of deciding whether to become a Campione or not (she wishes for the power to fight alongside Shirou), but we don't see her decision

After which she wakes up, finding a relieved Athena, who is trying to make time while Metis "dies" of indigestion, wanting to take Arturia somewhere else for it; although our protagonist quickly realizes this, and interrupts her, asking about Shirou (who is still inside Athena's mother) eventually making Athena confess everything (after threatening her with using a Command Seal - either to make her talk or to call Shirou at her side - would it work? - )

Between that and going to the living room to see the bizarre image of Guinevere tying up and dominating Rin, despite being in a younger body (XD); After the introductions (the Chibi Witch introducing Rin as her minion, err, student/apprentice) and understanding the situation, Arturia realizes that they cannot follow Athena's plan, especially given what happened with Pandora, fearing that in revenge , The Goddess would give the authorities of Metis (Shirou) to Donni or Godou (as Arturia asks if the Goddess are petty, and while Athena denies it, Guinevere answers yes without hesitation)

Which makes me believe that Arturia is either already a Campione (although Athena or Guinevere have shown no signs of perceiving anything different in her), or in the end, Shirou himself dissuaded her from doing so, upon understanding the type of life of said entities (Campione) and him not wanting that life for her; hence Arturia fears that Pandora is upset either by having been forced to convert her, or by Arturia believing in Shirou and refusing to be transformed (Enkidu would approve of this)

As for Rin, apparently she has selective hearing, thinking of paying part of the blame she has, since it was because of protecting her that Metis devoured him; in addition to her (and Ishtar) fantasizing about winning over - conquering - Shirou if she/they help save him

And speaking of assimilating/usurpating, Metis thinks that she did it with Shirou, but everything indicates that she will be the one who ends up being rewritten by Shirou, because unlike Athena, Metis, in addition to suffering firsthand from an overload of Shirous abilities, expelling swords and weapons all over her body, being constantly wounded; at being forced to repeat this Shirou's UBW aria, she is being rewritten - she would stop being an Earth Mother Goddess, and become Steel (which Athena did avoid, although her link to Shirou's power was not as powerful as her mothers and was able to resist it, although it cost her a lot); she even starts talking like Shirou, saying that she wants to be an Ally of Justice; to react and Metis desperately crawling to try to reach Athena and stabilize herself when devouring her

How ironic will it be that now it is Athena who will be used as bait, to attract Metis?

Good luck and keep it up
PersonaNinja Lux chapter 35 . 7/21/2024
ah yes teenagers
orion0905 chapter 35 . 7/21/2024
Yes, that was great. Now what did Turi choose?
RoyalTwinFangs chapter 35 . 7/21/2024
Nice chapter.
ArashiNokitsune chapter 35 . 7/21/2024
I believe Arturia is going to do things the Fate series way, also just what did Rin just go through considering she was basically a civilian getting caught up in a situation way over their head... yeah... still what's up coming is a battle to prove Pandora wrong to show a new way of doing things in terms of the magic Society in this crossover after all in terms of the Campione Universe majority of the magic society seemed to be very overly of reliant on higher powers in order to use magic unlike the fate universe... where Enkidu argues that Humanity does have potential on its own, Pandora still thinks that Humanity needs a safety float... the hype is rising again author just keep cooking
Azelios chapter 35 . 7/21/2024
Awesome as always however i would like for the Authour to never let Shirou cower before Gilgamesh again like on the other fic.

Everytime Gilgamesh have a cameo, Shirou always been given a backseat because of Gilgamesh
E chapter 35 . 7/21/2024
Oh Shut up guest below, the one talk about enkidu is wrong. Enkidu has some correct views about humans having Infinite potential. Pandora never believed in human potential, she just like the skeptics who couldn't believe that humans could walk on the moon.
Guest chapter 35 . 7/21/2024
To the Guest below complaining about Enkidu. Shut the fuck up you condescending dick.
Guest chapter 35 . 7/21/2024
Also to add to Enkidu prove of Mankind's potential. Shirou existence in this story is a definite proof of that. A Hero that was born in the modern age without the use contract like CG Emiya.

Also for the guest below that disagree with Enkidu, remember that this is a crossover. The system of both Campione and Nasuverse blend in to make this works. This not just a pure Campione fic, if that's the case. Then, there is no point of crossover between two franchise if only the Campione gets the most out of it.

Enkidu and Pandora debate is just a prove on how different the view between verse is like. Enkidu, true to his Character disagree with how Campione system works. While Pandora, of course will defend her own world system. This what makes it interesting, if you don't like it then you can stop reading this fic. It is your own choice after all.
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