Reviews for Shadow Stalker: Advent of a Hero
silentstrixe chapter 14 . 12/24/2020
Very good. Just marathoned this story in the last few hours and enjoyed it to bits.

Normally I despise Sophia because she is either always written as such a bitch, or those stories that try to redeem her do a half assed job. This story does it quite well though.

The only thing that I think could make this story better for sure is if you added an epilogue chapter that goes on to show the reactions of the rest of the world go Breaker and Shadow Stalker, both their relationship and as well as their reactions to Breaker's defeating Lung. Maybe a little scene of both of them settled into their relationship after a time skip. Obviously, the story doesn't actually need one, but it would make for a good closure of this fic.
Guest chapter 14 . 12/19/2020
Are you the original author of this story?
SeanHicks4 chapter 14 . 12/21/2020
Interesting take, not sure if I ever liked Sophia enough to look for a redemption fic before...
zigmas chapter 14 . 12/21/2020
Still saying that lesbos were unnecessary.
Are you implying that Sophia couldn't have been NORMAL friends with Taylor, huh?
Also I don't think you ever explained how she was able to counter the shadow state either.
I'm kinda disappointed, lol.
zigmas chapter 3 . 12/21/2020
Sophia channeling Skitter.
Taylor channeling Sparx.
So whom is Emma channeling, because I don't recognize that bastard of Whirlygig and Stormtiger, loool?
zigmas chapter 1 . 12/21/2020
This might have been cool, but TWO unwarranted lesbos are TWO unwarranted lesbos TOO MANY.
Let's see about the rest of the story itself, though.
Guest chapter 14 . 12/17/2020
Good job
Greatazuredragon chapter 9 . 12/18/2020
Haven't really noticed any changes so far if I am to be honest.
deathgeonous chapter 14 . 12/18/2020
Nice to see this return. Thanks for writing it, improving it and reposting it. Bye for now.
Sophie chapter 14 . 12/14/2020
Wait... I had already read this fic before.
Formatting chapter 5 . 12/14/2020
Chapter 5 seems to be a bit borked, formatting wise. The site may have eaten the formatting or something. An except from the beginning of the chapter is below:

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Kamiro G.S chapter 3 . 12/15/2020
*looks at the camera when they are discussing what powers they want*

"I see what you did there."
cameron1812 chapter 14 . 12/15/2020
This is just plain excellent. Love the story, the arc, the character development, and the end is perfect. Many authors have difficulty ending a story. You did that perfectly! Thank you
Rake1810 chapter 14 . 12/14/2020
Fantastic story and I’m glad you ended where and how you did
rc48177 chapter 14 . 12/14/2020
Glad the story ended at a succinct point. Not everything needs to make it to the very end, just the end that matters.
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