Reviews for The inner you
NEovator chapter 10 . 10/30/2004
It's okay. Your story is totally out of proportion with the TV series, but this isn't TV, is it?
secretpersonShadowLiger chapter 10 . 2/14/2004
would you mind updatin sometime in da next century
Skadi Hime chapter 10 . 12/30/2003
*Sighs as she tries to review for the second time* Yay! 'twas fun. um... don't have much to say this time. But it is good, and thanx again for letting me be a part of the maddness...
Bloody Phoenix chapter 10 . 12/24/2003
Well... that was certainly interesting but... ah what the heck? It's certainly something new for my character. Good chapter overall. Keep updating!
Jadwi chapter 10 . 12/24/2003
uhh such a crappy ending! How could you? Okay i'm just kidding but you probably guessed that already. No spelling errors or anyerrors that i could see. Than again i can't spell today... crappy writers block... do you know who i am? Do you want to know? Well even if you don't I'll tell you... I'm LEOFA-NIN-LEGOLAS! Just not signed in... :) And as always..continue..
Paiku chapter 10 . 12/23/2003
Hehe! Great chapter! Phoenix and Aerin are unbelievably cute - can I steal them so I can glomp them forever? Anyways, update ASAP! I'll be waiting!
Nabooru chapter 10 . 12/23/2003
Wow...our team is psycho... *g*
Warp Ligia Obscura chapter 8 . 11/23/2003
Dunno whether you already know...

the Raynos has 3 Beam Cannons mounted on the undercarriage.

The Shadow Fox... lemme see... there's a laser vulcan gun, a four-set of strike laser claws, a smoke discharger... i think that's it. not a lot.

but still more than the Raynos.

Skadi Hime chapter 9 . 11/18/2003
No problemo. I can wait... a little... *snickers at the possibilities*...

By the way, this being non-relative to the story whatsoever and about coffee, I learned something (the next day after I posted). Ibuprophen (I'm a migrane sufferer) very hot, strong, coffee 2 packs of Nerds cheesecake early saturday morning is not such a good idea...
YugureKyuketsuki-Ai-Ansoni chapter 9 . 11/14/2003
BRAT? So your calling Brad a brat are ye? Well he could if he has any siblings... I bet your wondering 'what the heck is she talking about?' Well in Polish BRAT means BROTHER or at least the part of Poland my family is from... Just thought i'd announce that spelling error in a weird way... So did i succeed? And good chapter, though short...
Bloody Phoenix chapter 9 . 11/14/2003
well, i was intending to be a guy, but in my absent mindedness, guess i forgot to put the gender down. Oh well, no biggie. Anyway, good chapter.
Nabooru chapter 9 . 11/14/2003
I'M IN THIS CHAPTER! E! *insert excited giggling and happy dance*

I thought the scene with Brad and Naomi was really cute. I could see the whole thing in my head (not to mention that I wanted to hit the nurse when she said he had to leave, hehe).

It was a good chapter! I liked it a lot! And good luck on your finals!
Fox-Almasy chapter 9 . 11/13/2003
OK i havnt read your story yet but i'm planning on it. i was just picking different stories and looking at the reviews and i noticed on one of your reviews someone said you spelt Pteras wrong. the way you spelled it is right so i just thought i'd let you know and if i have time i will read your stroy. _
Naval Ace chapter 9 . 11/13/2003
Well, It's a good story but a couple of flaws. Like torpedoes are missile type weapons used for naval combat. You should have said Missiles, Note chapter 2. And there are more flaws but I don't wanna get boring. Anyways great story, keep writing.

~Naval Ace~
A BlackHole chapter 9 . 11/12/2003
[See SD Gundam for character]


[Sorry I like acting EVIL HAHAHAHA]
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