|Reviews for Letters and Plots|
| Aeflid chapter 7 . 10/14/2003
Oh, for goodness skaes, I didn't even think of NEVILLE as a bad guy! Lol...
| Rio chapter 9 . 9/13/2003
I'm enjoying your story thus far. I think you have an interesting twist on a story that many people have tried to tell before. You have done a good job with keeping the reader invested with the outcome of the story.
However, having said this, you do need to work a bit on the continuity. Case in point, back in Chapter 5, Sirius is alive and kicking and off to rescue Hermione. Here in Chapter 9, he's as dead as a doornail. While I realize that you are trying to incorporate the events of OOTP in the story, I think it gives more credibility to the writer to either decide to incorporate or not incorporate the new canon.
Good luck and I look forward to reading more of your work.
| wallyflower chapter 8 . 9/12/2003
I've read this story to the end and have enjoyed it immensely. I love your Snape and I love your Hermione as well, and I look forward to reading your new SS/HG! -C
| Azrael chapter 1 . 8/28/2003
I swear i don't think you get enough reviews! oy! you're i wonderful and amazing writter mystery person who goes by the name btvshond but then again i'm a mystery also lol well anyways i've just got to say again that the severus snape pov you wrote was astounding and this fic here i have read before that and its simply beautiful too. thank you for writting it and expanding my mind and letting me explore my imagination while reading your fic.
| Greenstuff chapter 13 . 8/27/2003
that was a wonderful fic! i'm a tad dissapointed to skipped that time stretch between the engagement and the wedding.. but the authour knows best. I loved how you were able to effectively combine letters with the story and Action and Drama with the wonderful romance. you're an amazing author. great job!
| SemiCharmed chapter 13 . 8/25/2003
No sequel in the works? Aw. I luved your story. It was sweet, short, and nice. Darn, and here I wanted to see some lil Snapes running about. Heh. Looking forward to your next story.
| Taya chapter 13 . 8/22/2003
Ohh, I love it! It's so cute! And as always, your writing style is impeccable, it suits Hermione and Severus perfectly!
| The Dark Insomniac chapter 13 . 8/20/2003
Nice ending! I liked it! I wish that Ron would stop being so selfish and actually be happy for her and Severus! Damn him! Anyway, I hope you write more SS/HG stories! :D
| AnnabelleElizabeth chapter 13 . 8/16/2003
bravo! great fic. it's been a while since i've read a happy ending. hope you write another soon.
| soul chapter 13 . 8/16/2003
this fic is fantastic! it's simply beyond words! I'm looking forward to your new piece of work!
| shadowed.phoenix chapter 13 . 8/16/2003
The ending was absolutely perfect. Couldn't have been better.
| abraxis chapter 13 . 8/16/2003
Thank you for a happy ending to a good story.
| Lily of the Shadow chapter 12 . 8/9/2003
I like this, i hope you update really soon! And as for a Mary-Sue? A MS is a charachter, usually an original one, who is perfect in every way, perfect body, voice like the nightengales, every single man she encounters falls madly in love with her, ETC.
| Renton chapter 12 . 8/9/2003
A Mary Sue is a story where you basically stick yourself in as one of the main characters and you also have this elaborate romance with a popular character. There are a lot of sites out there that explain this better, but don't worry, this isn't a Mary Sue, in fact this is a very good story.
| Gethsemane chapter 12 . 8/8/2003
Alice Cooper went to Hogwarts? Cool. Seriously though, I've enjoyed this story.
A Mary Sue can be a number of things. Mostly it is a self insertion fic, where you put yourself in the story with mega powers and the interest of main characters. It can also be a flat, original character with unusual powers or lineage and is usally Snape, Sirius, or Dumbledore's daughter, or Harry's long lost twin sister.
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