when is next chapter

nicely done

This was a good chapter, I am excited about this vice admiral. Still no mention of harp is kind of disappointing but I guess we will see how u progress

This story is awesome it's great I been enjoying it so far it felt satisfying seeing the beating the fishermen got they definitely deserve that after what they did to the women especially nojiko and I know nami is luffys girlfriend and that's great but is it also possible to pair nojiko with luffy to because from the guys I could see nojiko be with I think it's luffy in my opinion especially gives her a chance to experience what a real relationship is like that nami has with luffy when she feels ready to take that step in the future and it's not very often we see nojiko paired with luffy and don't have that many stories together either from what I seen and just to make it easier to find this story again when other readers are looking for it put the main characters names in the summary

It's okay if you didn't upload it on Sunday, as long as you didn't abandon this story i'm fine with it
I want to know, did Nami also got that kind of torture back then? Like being raped and punched?

When it's gonna update? T_T

Update time

This is a great story but the grammar mistakes ruin the story. I completely understand if English is not your first language but you should use microsoft word or google docs (which is free). The grammatical mistakes dampen the key scenes during the story becuase instead of Luffy saying "I'm going to be the King of the Pirates!" It comes out as "am going to have pirate of king" so you can see that it slightly ruins the affect of the whole moment but I can't wait for new chapter and well done on the previous ones.

i wat to know what will happen to tashigi please make her join the crew she does not deserve to die luffy can convince her telling her what they do it to him
and about smoker you can make a coin tois up
side a he join the crew
side b he does not care about what the marine did, get kill and his fruit goes to tashigi (i like this one)

Hey, you don't care what others think. I support you, I must say I really liked what I read. This is what Luffy has to take seriously about killing enemies just to protect his loved and innocent ones, the entire crew should train and study more to become more powerful. Take Batman as an example, I really admire him for being a stronger and smarter human being. You really want to play Luffy as not only Saitama or Superman, but also Batman just for being a detective and smart. I know that the World Government and the Yonkous like Kaido and Big Mom are not going to take it seriously about the superpowered Luffy, stupidly still think that a brat like him is still a rookie and there is no way he could defeat Dracule Mihawk. I believe that Luffy maybe should make an alliance with Whitebeard, Shanks and other pirates like Eustass Kidd and Trafalgar Law to unite in action to overthrow World Government and kill all the nobles, which would leave idiots astonished to remember Rocks D. Xebec. Luffy needs stronger members and finally appoint them as commanders.
If the idiots don't take it seriously and still underestimate him for being "newbie", Luffy must show the world that he is really the strongest on the planet that surpasses Yonkous and Admirals, maybe even 5 old farts and Im. A Morgans journalist is very intelligent and knows very well what is going on in the world, I believe he will be a witness and will probably announce Monkey D. Luffy as a new Yonkou due to being much stronger than the other Yonkous. Of course, Blackbeard will be very angry. Furthermore, Luffy should claim all the islands as territories because they would help a lot not only to build a base, houses, castles, but also to protect innocents from enemies. So Luffy should recruit Johnny, Yosaku, Gin and even Nojiko, it will be better to expand even more crew. Perhaps who knows Luffy can build harem, there are no problems. Good luck buddy. Looking forward to reading.

I'm glad that now you already read my previous review about the mistakes (though there's still a lot in this chapter but hey, at least now i can rest easy knowing you also aware of this mistakes)
This story really become something special to me that i always feel impatient to wait for another week, but i know that there's nothing i can do about it because you also have personal life and things to do
Oh yeah, by the way where's the bounty hunter duo? I didn't see their name being mentioned in this chapter

Although I don’t see him doing anything to luffy I also don’t see him trying to kill him maybe fight him but not kill be mihawk is kind of a friend of shanks

It is a great story I really can't wait for him to enter grand line and for marines to realise cause of all this mess is they themselves

Are you going to make a reaction from Garp or Luffy's grandfather about Luffy still alive and coming back with that much power?

I think this is the time for you to update, it's already Sunday