Loving ur story. Cant wait to see the new bounty of the crew. I also love Nami's devil fruit power and wish to see more of it. Man, if other one piece fics can be like this one. I can't wait to see who the navy sends after Luffy and how Luffy will KO the moron. Can't wait for the next update Ben and thank you for a great story.

well i like the fic so far waiting for the next chapter althoug that i miself i am a fan of harem because be realist i don think that no women alone can keep with luffy resistan (if you know what i mean) for the oc if you are gona introduce please make it from another universe for example kimimaro from naruto with the fruit bone bone that alow bone manipulation

So cringe, oh my goodness. Just because you want the main character to have a tragic past, you don't have to be so over-the-top. Subtlety and mystery in these cases can do wonders for the story.

The name of his fruit is wrong for what it does. A Limit Limit DF would be able to Limit not break those limits. I think the word you are looking for is Limitless.

Good plot however really needs editing IE mint should be myth and numerus other things. If you where to write this in google docs and spend sometime editing before posting. It would be more readable. Also don't use caps when a ! would suffice.

Hey Ben, i have a question, since the ship isn't the Going Merry, so what is the figurehead oh this Sunshine?

This was a great chapter I really like the end, with navy having submarines it will be interesting who they will send from grand line
I especially liked your devil fruit for the crew they are not OP but have potential to be OP with a small amount of training. I really like how u are giving the utility fruit rather that the fruit with power to cause disasters
I really can't wait for next update

Oh come on, again with this spelling mistakes?
Dude you should really re-read your story before publish it because that mistakes is being repeated again and again and again, it's annoying you know
I say this because your story is good and i love it, really love it
But it's also really annoying that you make the same mistakes again and again, it's make me thinking that you didn't read your reader's reviews about this story because if you read the reviews, i swear that i'm already mention this

Great job loved it

Well, i already can see you have lemon scene of orgy with a bunch of Namis (and Luffys if Nami's awakening power is make her able to cloning someone else)

I see you always repeating the same mistakes, ('there' for 'they' and 'of cause' for 'of course')
I don't know whether you did it on purpose or not, but i hope you will fix it, after all this is a good story and i like it
But still, it can be annoying when you see the same mistakes over and over again

Interesting first chapter

That was good if not a bit fast for me
And where is Coby, was he also killed?

I think this story is excellent and hope to see Nami with some haki that would be cool but on the real are u going to give her a devil fruit cuz if so I wouldn’t be against anyway thank u for sharing

Good chapter, although there's a lot of misword, but it's still good to read
By the way i want to ask something, do you have some updating schedule? Or do you just update when you feel like it?