Reviews for Revenge of Monkey D Luffy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really wanted you to include Coby to the straw hats. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's kind of overpowered but cool at the same time, I like it. What happened with Ace? Will Dragon or Garp try to reach him also? hmm... hope to read another chapter soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder if his limit-limit fruit affects the minds of others? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it. keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great fanfic, great chapter, please keep updating as soon as possible, now that Xomniac (author of one piece this bites) has betrayed everyone and has guaranteed Ace and Whitebeards death, someone else has to write a End of the navy fanfic. And that person is you mr Ben. So far there have been only 3 one piece fanfics were the navy ends up being destroyed, one piece final holy war, this bites, and now yours. Final holy war was dropped and this bites has strayed from its path, it’s up to you to finish what they could not finish. Mr Ben I wish you the best of luck and hope that your story will surpass all one piece fanfics someday. |
![]() ![]() I love the direction the story is heading. The Luffy x Nami pair here seems unique and open for continued growth and development. Hopefully through each other they can relearn how to trust others again and direct their anger to those truly responsible, celestial dragons and corrupt marines. Hopefully we get some interaction between luffy and dragon in logtown, even if it is used for luffy to cuss out dragon for neglecting him to marine experiments |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, well Luffy with DF based from 'the baldie huh? It piques my interest. I also like LuffyXNami moments here since I'm a LuNa fan. I'm looking forward to the next and always take care yourself, okay? |
![]() ![]() I love it, please make more chapter and longer if it is possible And also can you add the pairing options in the filter? Your story kinda miss it when i'm searching Luffy x Nami fanfiction by filter And lastly, that's a nice Saitama reference lol |
![]() ![]() Can't wait for the next chapter Ben. I think this story will be awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not totally sure yet but it looks like it could be fun to read |
![]() ![]() That's a good concept But still i have one question, what about Coby? |