Reviews for Naruto: Rise of the Uzumaki |
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![]() ![]() ![]() well at least in the tv show there's that whole start of the fight where zabuza tells Haku to fight then for the entire time before naruto joins in to fight Haku as a team zabuza over and over repeats his name telling him if he interferes with the fight to save sasuke from the ice crystal mirrors he'd kill the bridge builder |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter, shame your muse seems to have escaped from your grasp again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Duuuuude you can't leave this on a cliffhanger! It's legit right where they figure the other is a Jinchuriki! It was just getting good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update soon |
![]() ![]() It always bugged me the amount of wasted potential Naruto, as an anime had. I like reading about what could’ve been. I enjoy seeing a different take on how they could’ve acted. What they could’ve done all in all. In my opinion this story checks all boxes for me. Awesome character development, no bashing of “frustrating” characters, and some great action. Good job author person. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey author-san are you working on re-writing JOT6P? |
![]() ![]() Man I really want to read the rest of this but looking through your other works, this is basically the third rewrite. Get back here and finish one! |
![]() ![]() Hope u come back this is a great story in my opinion love to see how Naruto and fuu will later talk about both being jinchuriki |
![]() ![]() ![]() Again this is the same guy who used 500 clones for wind training. If you are going to use the same method and trainings don't half ass it to make Naruto weaker. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok Sakura using shadiw clone jutsu even for 1 is insane. She would flat out just die. |
![]() ![]() ![]() How does Naruto not know about the byakugan? Has he never looked Neji in the eyes until this battle? Has he never seen a hyuuga in his entire life until this battle? Did he think the white eyes were normal? |
![]() ![]() Naruto vs Hinata is so boring she is such a boring character this I'm shy shit is so annoying It would have been cooler if they switched hinata and hanabi personalities |
![]() ![]() ![]() that's not how chakra control works |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update, I love it |
![]() ![]() This is so good, thank you. Totally following this for later. |